by Kittie621
Though the college girl was a willing seduction the build up and the ending were right on cue. Even though I am a male the read was a ride of erotic thrills and wonder. Please continue writing and have a follow up on how ali becomes a slut for not only her neighbour but her friends in the truth or dare game.
Far too rudimentary to be truly enjoyable! It felt like I was reading a script, not a story.
Liked the story. The pacing was good, as was the dialog. Keep writing.
A little rushed...could have been played out with more seduction. However, it was a fun & erotic story. Only wished this story was continued.
Will you be writing more stories and continuing this one? I sure hope so.
I really hope there will be another chapter, I loved it thank you.
I can't wait to read a second part to this wonderful story keep up the good work
We were in key west, my girlfriend wearing a thong string bikini- watching a fun show with hot music , this mom and her daughter starting to hang with us- the mom said that my girlfriend had some sun burn and needed lotion. Literally in the bar, she started to rub lotion on her shoulders as she was just in a bathing suit top, with a see through cover on her bottoms. I watched as her hands run over he back to just her thong line- my girlfriend looked like she enjoyed it, then the daughter asked her to dance-/ almost immediately the daughter was slow dancing with my girlfriend while the mother watched with envy. In a. Blink of an eye the mother daughter slow danced with my girlfriend with her in the middle. In public I watched a hand go right to my girlfriends lower ab at her thong line, thinking she would resist she did not. The three then go really close, the mothers hand went a little down the front and under the thong while the daughter began to kiss her neck. My girlfriend then moved her face to kiss her. The mother then moved in to kiss her too. After a short period of time-/ the mother daughter asked us to go to another bar. We did go, and it was a topless place on a rooftop. The three got so hot together, they were asked to leave.. they wanted to take my girlfriend to a hotel-- after that--
She was wearing a bikini and with no transition she took off her sundress. Huh?