Lovers Without Realizing It

Made me cum

I am SOOOOOO WET from your story!!!
I am going to pleasure myself tonight with the image of the 2 characters in my mind!

wow

oh man that was amazing thankyou

WOW!!!

That was incredible, that was the best I have ever read, even if it did take me more than two hours to read it! It is really amazing!

omg

seriously, this was incredible, im so wet, best thing ive read, im not even kidding, thank you so much.

Fantastic story.

This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it. Please continue to write more stories like this one.

amazing!!

that was the best story i have ever read on here.

I am so moved...

I am in tears and also incredibly aroused after reading your wonderful story. Jessica's emotions are intensely familiar to me, and captured in a way that makes me believe your characters are real. Thank you for a marvelous story that really connected with me. You are a writer of professional quality.

wow

i've made myself come so many times to this beautiful story. so well written and very sexy!!

GREAT

I have never read a complete story on here, this is the first. I had to know what happened. Great story!

Didn't cum but cried

This brought me to tears in the raw honesty and love depicted on the last page, no other erotica has every doen this to me and i thank you dearly for the experience. #1 in the lesbian genre for a reason :'')

Left me wanting more...

Wow, this story left me feeling so wet!!! Where can I find someone to hook up with like this for discreet rendezvous?? Loved it. While making love to my husband, I'll be thinking about these two...

Finally

Wow...this is the best story I have ever read on here!!!

inspiring

What an amazing & inspiring tale of how beautiful love can truly be! The ladies described were so sensual and passionate and complimented one another very well. Definitely one of the best stories inspired by real life I've had the pleasure of reading.

wow

I am so wet...what a well written piece.

Nicely done

Amazing

Amazing.
Loved it, and to think that this actualy happened to someone... it gives me goosebumps

that was amazing. my panties are soaked...thank you

that was hot!

i loved it! it made me so wet!

Outstanding

By far the best story I have read on Literotica thus far...

Amazing...

Never felt the need to comment on something here before, but this story is so endearing. It reminds me in an odd way of my first time. Thank you, to all of you, the writer and the two that allowed themselves be written about.

Perfect Erotica

I'm no expert on the exact qualifications of erotica versus romance, stories that have sex in them, etc. However, I get the sense that I can definitely call this story the best erotica I've read during my time on this website. It has mind-blowing sex, yes, but even more than that, it has the longing which I think of every time I hear the word 'erotica'.

You've written a beautiful tribute to your friends' love, and I am amazed at the skillful, sexy delivery of every sentence. I'm jealous of them, and even of your writing talent. This is a wonderful story.

You wrote pure gold here. Thank you for sharing it with me and the rest of us on this website. I cannot thank you enough!
AblatedCrayon

Stunning writing.

Drawn to this by ablatedcrayon's comment, as I can't resist a promisingly well written story. Loved it, Red Emerald, true talent...Mancelt.

i felt their love and lust growing in me. Well done. Thank you.

I've been reading on Literotica for nearly six years and this is by far my favorite story; I've reread it several times, in fact. I only wish that I knew what happened next for Jessica and Diane!

Stunning

A wonderful story of unspoken love, and lust.

High standard.....

Your story is my first. My first visit to this site. You have set a very high standard. The other comments tell me that you are the best. Wow. I am positive I will read this story again. I'm thinking of sharing it with my husband so he can enjoy your work as well. Thank you for the anticipation and the happy ending.....to the story :)

Excellent

i loved it. absolutely loved it. You painted such beautiful rich vivid pictures with your words. Gorgeous story!

Loved it

Just love this story of yours. Can't tell you how many times I've read it and know will read it over and over again a million times still. This story just makes me so warm inside and of course the scenes you've described are amazing. I have read your other stories too but this one's my fav.
Wish you would write more soon.
And best wishes to the two ladies in this story if they are still together.
Love.....

Fantastic

This story was truly delicious - well-crafted, engaging voice, beautifully detailed emotion, exquisite sex. A fantastic read.

Now, this is what the true erotic is in a literary term. Sex but no porn! All thumbs up! Fantastic story.

Amazingly sensual

This is the most sensual, tantalising and loving piece I have ever read. It thrilled me to the core and makes me want to seek out a beautiful older woman to pleasure and take control of.

One of the most fulfilling stories I've ever read here

This was a truly feminine story, in tone and content. Thank you, SO much!

Sexy and Loving

Definitely one of the best stories on literotica. It's detailed, while still allowing some imagination on the part of the reader. Thank you for sharing this amazing story!

Beatiful. Insperational. Sensual. This is a truly beatifull story, and so alive,, you write wonderfully, and i am so happy for your friends, i really do hope they live a long and happy life together. Thankyou for this passionate pice.

Makes me long for the lover I wish to have one day.
Although I would hope to be in Diane's shoes.

A True Love Story. . .

One of the best reads! I hope that Jessica and Diane live a long and happy life together, wish I could meet them both. Makes me long for the lover I wish to have one day.

Still one of the best

Just re-read this after nearly a year and just loved it. The characters are well done, the inner dialog great. Just hope we get more from you (demanding bunch, aren't we!)

*****

Five.

Absolutely amazing!

I've read this story several times now. I just love it! I hope you continue writing and post some more stories.

Wow...

This was so good, I am soo happy that this was my first story to read on here. I loved it, thank you for typing it out and everything.

Awesome !!

Omg wow simply WOW :) that is by far THE BEST story i have ever read on here or any other site in fact :) absolutely awesome read. Brilliant and i'm glad they're still together. Thanks :)

damn woman!

you are truly gifted. characters, sex content, pacing, everything. please keep it up!

Oh god

oh my fucking god this drove me crazy! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

Wow. Just... wow. That was amazing. :)

SUPERB!

That was a superb story: incredibly sexy, full of feeling and adventure. Truly a study of a developing relationship that grew and eventually flowered. And, there was no reliance on the usual 'dirty words,' (which Yes, I do enjoy) to titillate; this submission shows that subtlety can rise above and in a sense overcome the urge to turn people on using the quick and easy way, rather than displaying the writer's art. You have talent! When you feel deeply about something of broad scope with characters that require a significant development and have thoughts that you just must get out to the reading public, then give the Great American Novel a first shot. After many attempts and refinements maybe you'll produce it!

you got it!

I never take the time to write comments for anything, but your story is deserving of one. It was fantastic. I couldn't stop reading. It was enjoyable on so many levels....thanks for great writing and a great story.

Wow

This story is extremely intoxicating. The work and writing of it is amazing, simply one of the best erotic stories, in general, I've ever read.

Proof that love can happen when you least expect it.

Beautifally written story, thank you for sharing it.

amazing

simply amazing, love the restrain and the ending was perfect

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Wow - I can hardly believe that all that actually happened xD that was wonderful and you definitely succeeded in writing an entertaining, romantic, sexy, and amazing story

Wow.

You have a genuine talent!