Lovers Without Realizing It

beautiful

arousing and sexy and beautiful, without being too much. very well written.

Beautiful

Holy Shit!

I am totally blown away that those events are real. The events contained in this story are totally awesome! I also wish the happy couple the best of luck with this relationship. Wow I love the witty ending.

WOW

I loved the story, just enough sex without being too totally explicit.

GeeeZuz

You sent me wild... Dont ever stop. Such beautiful writing.

WOW

i did not want this to end i wanted more and more.... please write a part 2 i beg you!! amazing writing just perfect !

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AMAZING! Truly the best BEST story I've ever read on here!! Very well written. Thank you and PLEASE write a part two and other stories!!!

Deserve :)

I may not be an important person or a expert in literature, but I have to say I have a passion for words and what you've done with them in this story is absolutely amazing. This is the best story I've read here, You certainly deserve your place as number one. I sincerely hope you decide to make a new entry. I would even go as far as paying for one of your stories. I'm lucky you've graced this story upon us for free. Overall, thank you and you are a very talented writer.
~Lillian

Hats off to you! Absolutly fantastic. Part two? :)

You Are The Best

You must write more. This is superbly written.
I love these characters. This is truly a love story.
ThAnk you.

Perfect

The way it ended left me in tears...beautiful.

Wow

Your writing was powerful and sensual. A very stimulating story indeed. Loved reading your story and hope there are more to be read!

A nice wet one

A very compelling story, no wonder thy are still together

Beautiful writing

Very sweet

sounds familiar

This is amazingly close to what happened with my girl and I. Only we were in middle school and we are now in high school discussing getting a apartment together. her name is Jessica too but I call her Jessi during intense moments too. This is exactly what happened with us. except only her parents agreed with it in middle school and my parents kept us apart but in the beginning of high school we ran away together and proved our love. But yea we started off sexually and i was straight but now I love her with all my heart and love this romance story

I keep coming back for more (pun mostly unintended)

I can't count how many times I've read this story (or, indeed, how many times it's, uh, satisfied me). It's brilliant, beautifully written with great characterisation, set-up, build-up, the lot. Big kudos on your very much deserved No. 1 spot. And, like countless others, I'd love to read more of your work. I click on RedEmerald a lot, hoping to see more submissions, though when there's nothing new it just gives me the opportunity to re-read, savour and appreciate this work. Would love to see more stories from you and would REALLY love to see a companion piece to this one from Diane's perspective. (Oh, and echoing others, very much appreciative of the proof-reading, grammar and spell-checking that goes into your work :))

awesome

all i can say,or type, is Holy crap that was good. I can't beleive it is real and I really like that there was a beginning and not just all sex.

Stunned!

I read some stories in here but this made me completely utterly.... mesmerized!! I was allmost into tears at the ending.

Breathtaking

The real deal

So many lesbian stories are actually male fantasies about what they think happens. This is undenyably the ral thing. Sensual, erotic and emotionally touching - one of the best stories on the site - or anywher for that matter.

Great Story

This is my second time reading it and I still teared up at the end >.<
Great story!
I only wish I knew a little bit of what was going on in Diane's mind

Wow!!

This was incredibly well written (and incredibly hot). This story lasted me a good (and fun) three days (I found myself very satisfied many times). Not only is it a fun and sexy story, it is also a beautiful one. I found myself in tears at the end.

yummmm

wish id a g/f like that!!
all that talk of pussy loving has me hot wet n wild ;-)

Beautiful

Finally this is highest rated.

WOW! so darn hot.

A great story

I thought this story was compelling and erotic. Lovely.

Incredible

Wow... just... wow. That was incredible, in all aspects. A real 5/5.

That was hot!
Would love to hear more about these two.
Definitely a 5/5

A true love story

I feel this was written with a lot of feeling for the people involved, and I was waiting for them open up to each other and say how much they love each other. I am a believer that we find true love when we least expect and with the person we least expect. lots of love to you both

Incredible.

Your capture of love,confusion,fear,and downright lust was envigorating. I couldn't stop reading at all! I felt like I was there. Truly incredible.

Awesome!

That was amazing! I couldn't stop reading either. I want more...

This was beyond amazing

mmmmmm

i had an orgasm toward the end without even touching myself! 10/5

Wonderful story!

This story is exquisitely captured with great warmth, passion and humanity. It artfully delves into the emotions of the protagonists leaving the reader hanging on every word. This is erotica at it's finest. Truly mesmerizing.

that was the BEST I've ever read. No doubt.

This was sooo well written!!! It was one of the BEST stories i've read!!! LOVED IT!!

Oh wow. That gave me chills all over. Great job.

Wow

100% entertainment. Romance, suspense, you name it and it was there. I got so into the story that I was laughing out loud and yelling "Don't do it! You'll get fired!" at my computer screen every so often. Absolutely loved it. Please write more. Haven't read anything so good in a long time.

Wowww!

Best I have ever read!!!! Well worth every bit of the time I should have spent studying! Keep writing ;)

Oh. My. GOD

That was amazing. im no expert on these stories but WOW best i've ever read. I didnt want it to end! amaazing. i was wet the whole way through ;)

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was sooooooooo amazing and the best one of these i have ever read just wow pure wow :D:D:D:D:D

WOW!

You succeeded - entertaining, romantic, and definitely sexy. As someone said already, I didn't want it to end. Well written, well done. This is how erotica should be written.

OMG!!!!!

By far the best story I have read on here!!!!!!!! It had me on edge definanly didn't want I to end please continue!!!?!

WOW

that was byy far the most amazingstory. And it makes it so much better thatits true. Saving the kiss for last made it so sensual and complex and and amazing! I'm a lesbian and this is the ultimate love story. I didn't feel like I was just reading smut it was wonderfully complex and thought provoking.

Great but...

I really wanted to find out what happened to the couple after the story ended. For me at least, leaving a short note that says "In case the reader is curious, these two are still together, almost ten years after the events depicted here." doesn't cut it. I know they are together, but I'm still curious to see how things played out after they became a couple. Did Jessie stay on as her assistant since they no longer had to worry about losing each other? Did their pre-meeting rituals change at all? I don't necessarily want you to write up another sex scene, but it would be nice to have a short epilogue so the reader can see where the two ended up after the events in the story.

Wow

I've read some good stories, and some hot ones, and this manages to be both a lovely story about two gorgeous characters, and one of the steamiest reads out there. Bloody brilliant. Keep writing, please god, keep writing.

perfect

I agree with the person who said "this is how erotica should be written" - very very well written - amazing! loved this story

WOW!!

I agree with the comment that said this is what true erotica should be like! It was very hot and steamy, but in a loving, caring way that was not at all smutty. I'm a guy and my wife and I are best friends, but I don't think I'll ever know the kind of sexual intimacy you describe in this story. Don't get me wrong, we've had some incredible sessions over the years, but to know what it feels like on the other side, and be able to anticipate and respond to your partner in the way described in this story seems to me to be the ultimate act of loving and giving!

WOW

Just WOW

Amazing

I am always looking for a story that reminds me of my own - that talks of LOVE and what happens in the real world when two women love each other - I am happy that you break the stereotype of lusty lesbians to reveal that love is beautiful and sex between two women is a bonding experience that is very erotic but even more so for committed couples!!!

exceptional

I absolutely love a happy ending and the way you brought these two to life with all their hopes and insecurities was immense. Without a doubt the best story I have read on this site.