Lovers Without Realizing It

LOVED IT!

This was a really great story. Loved it all the way through.

Fabulous!

This was such a great story, both romantic and intellectual at the same time. Best story I have ever read, thank you to the author and to Jessie for her patience in waiting it out!

AWESOME!

Truly AWESOME! The best story I've read on this site!
It felt like I was reading a romance novel! Loved it!!!

Great!

One of the best stories I've read in a long time.

Ahhh~

This is an amazing story. I loved it so much-- very well written and entertaining the whole way through. I never once got bored. I will certainly keep on coming back to this one for the weeks and years to come.

loooved it

It was a romance, not just about sex. Please write more!

Perfect!

This absolutely took every emotion I've ever secretly had and put it in to beautiful, enticing words. Not only am I thrilled that they stayed together- that there is hope for such wonderful dreams to come true, but I am so appreciative of the incredibly written storyline and the style you used. Please please PLEASE write more! I don't even care what about. I would love to read anything you write (whether erotic or not), and can't wait to see the next one. Congratulations on a VERY successful first time!

Disclaimer:
Don't start reading this if you have something to do (e.g. work, class, honey-do's, etc), because you will become so engrossed that the world will turn off around you and you will be left in a blissful state of existence with these two characters. :)

Great

One of the best i have ever read

I have never ever read something so incredibly intense and beautiful, you should be very proud of yourself.

Great

oh. my. god.

I cant believe that when someone asks me who my favorite author is i'm going to have to reply "RedEmerald on a website called literotica.com". Just read all your stories right now and you are amazing. Wish you wrote general fiction too.

OH WOW,

The best story by far i've ever read, this is what everyone dreams of happening in thier lifetime. WONDERFUL, Keep the stories coming. It made me want to be that girl. Got to read it again & again.

WOW

This story was fantastic even more so because it was a true story, a fantastic piece of writting that i didnt want to end! Just brilliant!

Just wow

I have read this several times now and parts of it just keep echoing in my mind. I know for sure I will come back to re-read this again in the probably not so far future. It's really hot and still so very sweet at the same time. Love it.

Also: I will never be able to watch "Damages" again.

Loved your story

You should expand on it and make Diane not only your boss but your Domme. Fantastic.

it even smells good

When Jessica happens upon Diane's panties and is aroused by her scent, at that point I realized I was getting wet. When we did laundry as I was growing up, I discovered that my two older sisters did not smell alike, and nether did my mother compared to me. Thanks to the author for writing a part affirming the sense of smell.

Thank you

Breathtaking work, extremely well written, and a great basic story as well. Would love a follow up story on this couple. Thank you again.

Amazing.

This was so well written and got me off so fast... Really sexy and hot. Thank you so much for this! Will definitely be coming back.

wow

good god this is an absolute work of art, not only was this incredibly hot but it was easily the best short story I have read in my life. If you are not currently a writer, then change professions immediately.

good story, also...

my best wish's to the happy couple

wonderful story

Thanks for the great job you did!!!

Can you write something from Diane's point of view??

Reading for a second time.
Love this story so much.

And I agree with the previous comment!
What about Dianne's point of view?
That would be really interesting to read.

holy monkeys

wow, where is the sequel

wow what a story. some amusing parts too.

Great read. This one's earned its place.

Awsome

A story I wanted to actually read and finish because of the story, as well as the sex. You could be a real author.

totally loved it

I've read this a few times over months, years perhaps. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

Sexy!!!

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Great story!!!

Certainly one of the best ever!

This story is the best story I've read on Lit. I had read it a while back and re-read it today and I and I realized what a terrific job this author has done with this story.

Fantastic!

What a wonderful and well written story. It just so happens that we are an attorney and his former secretary. Kay is very bi and Steve loves to hear of her adventures with women. This story is one of the most erotic we have ever read here. Your writing is superb.

Wow

What a beautiful, sexy & erotic love story!

OMFG!!!

I'M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS FILLED WITH ALL THESE INTENSE EROTIC DESIRES OF LUST AND LOVE.... I COULDN'T HELP BUT TO FALL IN LOVE WITH BOTH WOMEN...

i actually started crying because of how arousing this is.

This is the best ond hands down

This was a great story I read it twice and then I read your other stuff. Your writing is wonderful I really wish you would write another. I legit cummed my pants without touching myself.

This was so good; I masterbated so many times after reading....

I can't remember a time when I came so much just from reading an erotic story. My bed sheets were soaked and I am still thinking about wanting to be in this story. Delicious writing! Love it!
Horny Housewife from Milan, Michigan

This actually happens in real life? Damn, I have some hope after all! Amazing writing. Glad they found each other! :]

DIZZAM

this story is great one of love and everything else and thats good that they r still together and im glad they are they deserve each other

OMG

awwwwww.... loved the ending. And such hot details.. raaaaaaaaaaaaar!

A beautiful story superbly written, thank you for sharing this.

That was a fantastic story. Very well writtne. It kept me avidly reading wanting it to go on for ever

Totally love this story, it gives me hope. Well written, couldn't stop reading.

I love this story

I have read it so many times, so sweet :D

Incredible Story

I have read this story several times and to know that it's a true story just blows my mind. Thanks for sharing this.

Elle_S

Erotically Amazing

XD This story had me laughing so much, and I just want you to tell the characters in this-- they're very warm, realistic, and a very cute couple. ^^ One of the best real stories that have been altered that I've ever read, and not just because of the physical intimacies. It's because it's so obvious they were meant for each other!! =3 Thank you so much for sharing.

Definitely a sexy story

A wonderful Story,definitely an entertaining, romantic, and above all sexy story for us to enjoy. And Enjoy I did.

Could we have a sequel- where the story unfolds the continuing relationship and the erotic things That they did/do.

Ranji from Sri Lanka

disappointed

not disappointed in the story,only the fact that it ended,could have read another 5 pages,any chance of a sequel?

Perspective..

Would it be possible to maybe get the same story from Diane's perspective? Loved the story and would love to know some of the thoughts that went on during parts of this great story

So beautiful...

Such love and intimacy at such deep levels. Superbly expressed to the reader. If only every person could experience such a loving relationship in their lives... Bravo, well done!

i love it please make a sequel with diane's side of the story

amazing

Wonderful Story

Wonderfully told story. Any chance of sequal from Diane's perspective?