Lovers Without Realizing It

Lovely.

As the relationship started out imbalanced and awkward, it was nevertheless engaging and intriguing. Are all loving relationships unbalanced and off kilter at first? The writing progresses gradually and subtly just like life and then the reward of something more comes to conclusion. One word to sum it all up: Lovely.

Loved it

This was such an amazing story

Thank you...the story was amazing.

omg

Oh my god......this story was wonderful. I loved it. It reminded me why I am a Lesbian. This story made me come myself so to speak. Made me and my lover have wonderful sex. Again i say thank you for writing this wonderful story.

loved it

this was an amazing read with and ending so cute it almost made me cry. thank you.

Loved it

Loved it! From a straight male that very much enjoys lesbian love making stories!

I really enjoyed it

Amazing

Amazing story with a fantastic ending. This story really was more about love than sex and I am glad they are happy together after all these years. Thank you for writing this.

Oh my god, this is fucking adorable... Shows that love exists in strange places, and it has a way of surprising you in ways you've never thought possible.

Awww(:

I Cried when i read this becuase this shows it doesnt matter what kind of love there is just as long as there is love everywhere. my whole life i have been dealing with being a lesbian and trying to conceal this sort of feeling that is going on in my head. Gulityness maybe but to read this makes me think that anything is possible for love (: :_)

Beautiful

Actual tears are running down my face. Such a truly lovely story. You wrote it so beautifully :D I feel lucky to have had this story shared with me. Thank you :)

I have read this story multiple times and the ending still gets to me. so good.

A true love story.

I was totally wrapped up in this love story. Enjoyed it immensely.

I never thought I liked romance.....

I never really thought I liked even somewhat remotely romantic stories, even between two women, until reading this. It's the perfect mix of bittersweet emotion, love, and deep passion. Me being a sex-crazed lesbian, I found the constant sex largely satisfying and in their own way heartwarming. This piece is much appreciated :)

Loved it!

Best erotic story I've ever read!

The way you wrote this story was very beautiful, indeed. It didn't sound like an erotc story until those parts, and the rest of it sounds like a regular novel that I would read and love, not that I didn't love the whole thing ;D I wish I had your writing ability.

Incredibly Hot!

I felt every part and im still flushed that was amazing. Thank you for sharing this story. Just WOW!!!

Still one of my favorites

I just finished reading this wonderful story again, for about the fifth time over the years. It continues to be one of my two favorite stories on this site.

Awesome

This was a beautifully written love story. Plus it was extremely erotic. This is my tenth time reading it over the last year. Thank you for telling their story.

So romantic

That was soo beautiful i want to find a girl like Jessie to love me like that

Sigh

Incredibly beautiful. My favourite part was when Diane called her "darling"...

Wow. Actually some romance and not just bang bang gone.
This is what I want to see more of.

wow

So amazing. It is probably the best thing I've read in a while. Simply amazing. Loved it.

Amazing

This story was much more than I was expecting from a free erotica sight, and I am pleasantly surprised! Thank you and your friend for sharing this. It was very sexy and well written. I don't recall hoping for a happy ending while reading this type of writing before, but I couldn't help but grin at the end. Thanks!

Incredible

That story was incredible. Beautifully written. So true to the female psyche and way of thinking. So realistic. Loved it. Almost moaned when Diane called Jessie "my darling"

Great

Loved it. Thank-you

Amazing

i usually critique my friends erotic drawings and comics but this was really good i think i might try writing a few. Also i look forward to any more writing you do.

Amazed

That was hands down the best story I've ever read on here. The whole time I was reading it I couldn't believe that it was real but the fact that it is made that much better. And I can't even put into words the reaction it pulled from me. Towards the end, when Jessica said "Diane I can't...I can't hold it if you do..." I lost it. I couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen and then when I found out that they're still together today, I shed a tear because their love is so beautiful and special. This comment is really long but you deserve all of this and more. I'm so happy these two women trusted you enough to document this because it was truly stunning! I haven't read a story that is this level of good on here in a long time-you've revived my hope for this website. Thank you so much for posting and once again, this is incredible! If your other stuff is as good as this, then you've got yourself another watcher. So take care Emerald, I was very much in awe.

In awe!

This was amazing. From start to finish you had my complete attention. All I want to do is keep reading. I wish there were more! Such a beautiful story and I am so glad your friends let you share it. Thank you :)

One of the best stories I ever read

I came across this story a few years back and I had really loved it... the way it's written, the story itself. Just amazing!
When I wanted to read it again, I couldn't remember on which site I had found the story. I have been googling true lesbian stories for months trying to find it and raking my brain trying to remember on which site it was but just couldn't find the story until today :) Thank you for sharing it with us. I love it! :)

Love the descriptions

Your descriptions of oral sex inspire me.

Still my favorite

Still to me the best love story ever written .

Such a well written story.

Such a well written story! Love all of the small details you peppered in. Would love to read more from you :)

Great Writing

This was written very well while I like some stories that are only one page I much prefer for them to be longer like this one. I like how the characters are fleshed out and how the story develops. This has a plausible feeling to it I guess in all I'm saying I really liked it.

So, um, Unconventional Assistance, anyone?

Do you're homework

Unconventional assistance actually is based on this. Do your homework before you comment!

wow

wow that was one of the best that i have read i loved it keep writing please, awesome characters, it got me so turned on

LOVE IS LOVE

I NEVER GAVE MUCH THOUGHT OF LESBIAN LOVE BEFORE. AFTER READING THIS STORY I THINK I HAVE TO RETHINK MY FEELING ABOUT SAME GENDER SEX. LOVE IS LOVE REGARDLESS OF WHETHER IT IS HETEROSEXUAL OR HOMOSEXUA;. GOD BLESS THOSE WHO ARE TRULY IN LOVE.

I've been...

I've read this story when it was first posted, I re-read it again a couple of months ago and for some reason the second time I read this has made me realized what an amazing erotic story this is. And I won't admit to reading it more than twice a week since I started reading it again. It's how much I love it. Thank you so much for writing and posting this here.

P.s.

I keep hoping there's another story from this but from Diane's perspective. I'm not sure. But the love story between this two people has held me in thrall.

Can't Believe

How many fanfic stories has copied from this. Makes me mad and sad. Anyway, I'm making up for not writing anything even though this has been my story to go to when I want some escape.

It's been a couple of years since the author has posted anything, but I'm still hoping RedEmerald will post a story or two (or three or four... okay you get it) one of these days.

It's Funny

I saw that I already posted my comment here back in 2009. Anyway I just want to say that even though I liked it before, I loved it now. I am spamming your page, sorry. I just want to make up for reading-re-reading this story more than I can count without giving something back to the author. So this is my way of giving back. Thank you very much for writing and posting this. I love Jessica and Diane. I love the tone, choice of words, the writing, the characters. A perfect short erotic story.

Great story...very nicely written

I thought this was a great story. One of the best I've read. Good character interaction developing the growing feelings between the woman and keeping it sweet and real.

Please keep on writing : ) and you'll have plenty of readers wanting to read more of your stories.

awsome

likely one of the best lesbian stories I've read yet, i love how it starts as nothing more then a simple quicky for her boss but blossoms into a full fledged relationship

Just, wow.

You need an agent because your work should be published. I loved every word, you painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Well done!!
Jen :)

Oh my dog!

I can't put into words how much I loved this. The character development was just off the charts. I feel like I knew the two people by the time I finished. I am also sad that it finished. I was hoping it would go on and on forever! One of the best stories I have ever read, not just on this site either. I really, really wanted to read Diane reciprocating the pleasure given to her by Jessie. I hope, against my better judgment since you haven't posted since 2009, that there will be more from you. More specifically, more of this absolutely gorgeous story!

I knew when I started reading that it would be great. How amazing it actually turned out, took me by surprise. Just magnificent! Thank you for sharing this!

gripping...

If I'm honest I'd say that the story, at first, simply had me wondering about the women that inspired it and I wasn't fully appreciating the scences that were unfolding. But as I continued, the words played in my mind painting a picture of desire, lust, and even love pulling me in and captivating my senses. I believe that you did an amazing job at protraying the emotions and deep seeded longing that resonated in the heart of one, and blooming like an exotic flower, until the petals reached the other. The sea of emotion was heart warming. Good job and thanks for writing. 5 stars.

Very, very sweet

And very, very hot! Loved it!

5 Stars!

Completely in love with this story! And so well written. Thank you!

loved it

just wish we knew more at the end about her boss,
could have been like "girl talk" on the bed after fucking ... you know ?
more about how she felt like, her internal struggles and all ^^

awesome story either way and really really erotic !

wow