Have read many stories on here; never left a comment, but this one is so good just had to write and congratulate you on a very well written tale. xx
by
Anonymous02/26/13
Freedom
This is probably the best story I've ever read!! If this is, and I expect it is, the way these two people became one, and that they are happy telling us about it, their love, so obvious from page 1, must flare like the best firework ever made.
And I feel very priveliged to have been able to share it.
by
Anonymous03/02/13
Fantastic
This is quite an inspiring story, and I loved every moment. the detail in every scene really made their feelings for each other clear. So I must say well done to you and a hearty congratulations to the couple on their finding each other, even if it were in the most unlikely of ways.
by
Anonymous03/03/13
Simply amazing.
Your work is an art. Amazing. Drawn in at every moment. Stay inspired :)
by
Anonymous03/09/13
Its one of the very few occasions when a sequel would spoil break the spell.
A magnificent story and worthy of saving and rereading!
You have given not only a beautiful, endearingly romantic tale, but also one of incredible eroticism and sexuality. It touched me deeply, and caused me to touch rather deeply as well... thank you, and please continue to write more.
by
Anonymous03/19/13
Brilliant!
Couldn't stop reading this once I began - fantastic tempo all the way to the end.
a loving and well written story that would equal any of the best seller" novels.
by
Anonymous05/26/13
Great Story
Great read, especially being about two who are a real life couple. Look forward to reading more of your writings.
by
Anonymous05/29/13
Wow....
This is definitely my favorite story. I was pretty much drooling the entire time I read it. I love that it's actually a real story, which makes it even more romantic, and SEXY. I hope those two are still enjoying each other as much as they did during this beginning stage.
Although a devout male heterosexual, I found your story to be a very satisfying, well written, and very sexy. I loved the tension that you built, and the very descriptive way that you told what was definately an ardent love story, although unknown at the time to the participants. A great read. Thank you
by
Anonymous06/09/13
I am a heterosexual female and started hating Diane but was drawn in and could not stop reading. I even hated her for what it seemed like she was treating Jessica. I felt her pain, I really did. I didn't think I would but it was so well written and the tension built just right. Glad I read it now. Kept thinking of myself and the way I can't orgasm almost wondering if I need that too.
by
Anonymous06/11/13
Amazing!!
I don't know how many times I have read this story, but every time I read it I get the same pleasure. The story was very beautiful, and sexy. I love this story it is by far my favorite.
by
Anonymous06/19/13
came
I came sooooo quick fuck u bitch
by
Anonymous06/22/13
Bautiful
This was brilliant! Kept me on the edge of my seat wanting more! My breathe was taken away through the whole story. Love the build up of the story and the climax at the end! Please write more!
Even though I was a regular in this site, today I created an account in this site to thank her and send a feedback to the talented author.
Hope to see more of her contribution.
An absolutely fabulous portrayal of a great love story. Please tell your friends who this story is based on that I wish them the best and that I truly hope that their love will last their liifetimes.
by
Anonymous06/28/13
Wow
...so beautifully written and exciting too! There are not enough words to explain how much I love this story!
Not usually a lover of the 'Lesbian Sex' genre, being only an 'inadequate' (?) male, but this was very nice indeed. Perhaps the 'real life' comments made it work for me more than usual, but an engaging, well written story whether true or fantasy. Well worth, I think, the 5 star vote that I awarded. Love is love, regardless of the gender of the people involved.
It's a good thing I don't smoke; I'd need a cigarette after reading that! Wow! I could replay those images in my head over and over until I had to take care of business. I love the emotional conflict and the byplay in a work context.
by
Anonymous07/05/13
Blew me away!
Best story I've read yet! Keep it up, this was amazing.
Very well written and with an extrememly emotional storyline.
Probably one of the best stories that I have read on here becasue of the emotions involved and not just the sexual part of the sotry.
Keep up the great work!
by
Anonymous07/24/13
that was so beautiful. i'm so glad they're still together!
by
Anonymous07/27/13
This morning my desire was to experience some lesbian love story.......As a man it was with thrill I loved your story.... You got my attention and thrill of wanting to take care of business as your very entertained me...I must admit my favorite thrill was the erotic coming together, And the pleasure you and Diane found in those thrilling orgasmic moments... I could almost tastily envisage it.... You did me right by putting it together in that manner...GOOD JOB and beautifully expressed...
loved the story, ive already cum while reading it twice n may even get another from it!
loved the writing style - and found her addiction to oral so captivating! loved the initial reluctance from diane. so nicely setup.
by
Anonymous08/03/13
aaahhh... fucking good
i culdn't stop myself from cumming while reading it.. i almost felt like jessie's tongue n lips were in mine rather than daine's..!! d best story.!!
by
Anonymous08/08/13
Best story
I keep coming back to this story because it is so good!
by
Anonymous08/13/13
Amazing
Heartfelt and just all in all a damn good read. Loved how unique and fresh each depiction of oral sex managed to be. Diane got it good, that's for sure!
by
Anonymous08/27/13
Wonderful
Loved this story very much...great writing!
by
Anonymous09/03/13
u are the best i juxt masturbated and ended up fuckin my 9 inch fat long dildo in my ass and pussy
U made me cum with my new slave receiving a hot spanking on her pussy
by
Anonymous09/09/13
Absolutely amazing writing, I couldn't stop reading for a second. I could actually feel the emotion and the tense moments in some of it that had me biting my lip and being super nervous at some points and happy for Jess ^^.
by
Anonymous09/10/13
Impressive
I very, very seldomly am impressed enough with a story to rate it, let alone rate it with all stars. Your story was magnificent; the grammar and spelling and word choices were all commendable. Some stories are written so poorly (obviously without the aid of spell-check) that I give up reading them. Yours flowed very well and kept my interest through the end. Thank you for this gem!
I don't know how experienced an author you are, RedEmerald, but this is one of the most loving, sensitively written examples of the genre that I have ever read. As an account of a real-life situation, you can sit back and feel very proud. This is the first time I have ever felt moved to leave a comment anywhere on this site. Thank you.
by
Anonymous09/26/13
Amazing
"Shut up and love me, Jessie." That made it for me. What made me even happier is that they became a loving couple 10 years later. Beautiful, 10/10.
English
Hot
Have read many stories on here; never left a comment, but this one is so good just had to write and congratulate you on a very well written tale. xx
Freedom
This is probably the best story I've ever read!! If this is, and I expect it is, the way these two people became one, and that they are happy telling us about it, their love, so obvious from page 1, must flare like the best firework ever made.
And I feel very priveliged to have been able to share it.
Fantastic
This is quite an inspiring story, and I loved every moment. the detail in every scene really made their feelings for each other clear. So I must say well done to you and a hearty congratulations to the couple on their finding each other, even if it were in the most unlikely of ways.
Simply amazing.
Your work is an art. Amazing. Drawn in at every moment. Stay inspired :)
Its one of the very few occasions when a sequel would spoil break the spell.
A magnificent story and worthy of saving and rereading!
Beautiful.
What a lovely tale!
So very lovely...
You have given not only a beautiful, endearingly romantic tale, but also one of incredible eroticism and sexuality. It touched me deeply, and caused me to touch rather deeply as well... thank you, and please continue to write more.
Brilliant!
Couldn't stop reading this once I began - fantastic tempo all the way to the end.
Magnificent!
That's about the only word I can think of. A real story, well written and enormously erotic. Bravo!
Still
This is still one of the best love stories written
Smiles
I come back now and again and still just as touching. Like visitng a special friend. Thanks.
Just getting started
This story was perfect to get me wet before I began to watch some hard core lesbo porn.. Bravo!
wow
your story is the perfect combination of sexy and romantic.
Amazing
Your story is so well thought out, beautiful and creative. You truly have a gift. Keep Writing!
best literotica story I've read in a long time!
Beautiful story, eloquent writing. Fantastic job!
Bravo
this story was awesome, i had never came across such a beautiful story. i adored the ending !!!
Female Perspective
This was great. One of the best I have ever read.
Dang
That was amazing! One of the best stories I've ever read, good job!
Wow. Simply fantastic!
fantastic
a loving and well written story that would equal any of the best seller" novels.
Great Story
Great read, especially being about two who are a real life couple. Look forward to reading more of your writings.
Wow....
This is definitely my favorite story. I was pretty much drooling the entire time I read it. I love that it's actually a real story, which makes it even more romantic, and SEXY. I hope those two are still enjoying each other as much as they did during this beginning stage.
What a story!
Although a devout male heterosexual, I found your story to be a very satisfying, well written, and very sexy. I loved the tension that you built, and the very descriptive way that you told what was definately an ardent love story, although unknown at the time to the participants. A great read. Thank you
I am a heterosexual female and started hating Diane but was drawn in and could not stop reading. I even hated her for what it seemed like she was treating Jessica. I felt her pain, I really did. I didn't think I would but it was so well written and the tension built just right. Glad I read it now. Kept thinking of myself and the way I can't orgasm almost wondering if I need that too.
Amazing!!
I don't know how many times I have read this story, but every time I read it I get the same pleasure. The story was very beautiful, and sexy. I love this story it is by far my favorite.
came
I came sooooo quick fuck u bitch
Bautiful
This was brilliant! Kept me on the edge of my seat wanting more! My breathe was taken away through the whole story. Love the build up of the story and the climax at the end! Please write more!
Thanks
Even though I was a regular in this site, today I created an account in this site to thank her and send a feedback to the talented author.
Hope to see more of her contribution.
Great work. Turned me on for a complete day.
Great, Great Love Story
An absolutely fabulous portrayal of a great love story. Please tell your friends who this story is based on that I wish them the best and that I truly hope that their love will last their liifetimes.
Wow
...so beautifully written and exciting too! There are not enough words to explain how much I love this story!
Oh Boy!
Not usually a lover of the 'Lesbian Sex' genre, being only an 'inadequate' (?) male, but this was very nice indeed. Perhaps the 'real life' comments made it work for me more than usual, but an engaging, well written story whether true or fantasy. Well worth, I think, the 5 star vote that I awarded. Love is love, regardless of the gender of the people involved.
Holy Shit!
It's a good thing I don't smoke; I'd need a cigarette after reading that! Wow! I could replay those images in my head over and over until I had to take care of business. I love the emotional conflict and the byplay in a work context.
Blew me away!
Best story I've read yet! Keep it up, this was amazing.
I want this
Beautiful sexy ...I want this.
fantastic story
This was a really fantastic story.
Very well written and with an extrememly emotional storyline.
Probably one of the best stories that I have read on here becasue of the emotions involved and not just the sexual part of the sotry.
Keep up the great work!
that was so beautiful. i'm so glad they're still together!
This morning my desire was to experience some lesbian love story.......As a man it was with thrill I loved your story.... You got my attention and thrill of wanting to take care of business as your very entertained me...I must admit my favorite thrill was the erotic coming together, And the pleasure you and Diane found in those thrilling orgasmic moments... I could almost tastily envisage it.... You did me right by putting it together in that manner...GOOD JOB and beautifully expressed...
Ahh-Maay-Ziing!
The story line is truly amazing, something i have always fantasized about. And not to mention the sex ... like ... wow ;)
Love It ∞ x100
skittle_lover (:
excellent story
loved the story, ive already cum while reading it twice n may even get another from it!
loved the writing style - and found her addiction to oral so captivating! loved the initial reluctance from diane. so nicely setup.
aaahhh... fucking good
i culdn't stop myself from cumming while reading it.. i almost felt like jessie's tongue n lips were in mine rather than daine's..!! d best story.!!
Best story
I keep coming back to this story because it is so good!
Amazing
Heartfelt and just all in all a damn good read. Loved how unique and fresh each depiction of oral sex managed to be. Diane got it good, that's for sure!
Wonderful
Loved this story very much...great writing!
u are the best i juxt masturbated and ended up fuckin my 9 inch fat long dildo in my ass and pussy
U made me cum with my new slave receiving a hot spanking on her pussy
Absolutely amazing writing, I couldn't stop reading for a second. I could actually feel the emotion and the tense moments in some of it that had me biting my lip and being super nervous at some points and happy for Jess ^^.
Impressive
I very, very seldomly am impressed enough with a story to rate it, let alone rate it with all stars. Your story was magnificent; the grammar and spelling and word choices were all commendable. Some stories are written so poorly (obviously without the aid of spell-check) that I give up reading them. Yours flowed very well and kept my interest through the end. Thank you for this gem!
Wonderful
A delightful story, perfect amount of tension, beautiful detail and full of love. Thank you.
Follow up
I HONESTLY HAVE NO IDEA HOW YOUR GOING TO FOLLOW THIS UP.
So Powerful and Gentle.
I don't know how experienced an author you are, RedEmerald, but this is one of the most loving, sensitively written examples of the genre that I have ever read. As an account of a real-life situation, you can sit back and feel very proud. This is the first time I have ever felt moved to leave a comment anywhere on this site. Thank you.
Amazing
"Shut up and love me, Jessie." That made it for me. What made me even happier is that they became a loving couple 10 years later. Beautiful, 10/10.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Lovers Without Realizing It or
More submissions by RedEmerald.