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amazing
wow
Amazing?
Amazing really is an understatement, a well written and moving story of two women who finally find a wonderful relationship. You make me want to be a woman so I can experience this kind of love, caring sensual and passionate. The final consummation of their love is brilliantly told. I am so pleased they continued and are still together after ten loving years.
Beautiful.
I've never been touched by a story enough to leave a review on this site, but this story was moving. I found myself connecting to these two women as if I had known them all my life. I was so attached to these two characters (people) in a way that I can cheer knowing they found such a beautiful love. You did such an amazing job telling their story. You have a true talent.
WOW
I have no words for this.. It's just wow... I've never thought to share any of my findings on this site with anyone that KNOWS me but I will definitely be sharing this because its just WRONG not too. Thank you, for taking the time out to produce this and please continue to write. Thank you.
Still my Favorite after 10 years on this site
I read this story a few years ago, had bookmarked it, lost track of it when my old PC died; and then had to read thousands of stories to find it again. So worth all of the time spent Thank you !!!.
Perfect
One of my favorite stories ever....
Wow...
Outstanding!!
Incredible!
The feeling portrayed in this story is simply breathtaking!
Loved it
Oh my God that story was so amazing! I loved it to the core. What great ladies they must be.
Incredibly delicious
Wow! This story is so beautiful. I was wet the whole time i was reading it. I kept on hoping it would go on and it would... Best story i have ever read!
an excellent read.no com
hello Red Emerald. your story here is sensual and in a way exciting. I found myself in the position of Jessie which had me reading the tale from beginning to end. I had to take a break between (work) sessions and actually looked forward to carrying on. Your description of the love making was as if you personally tpok part in this. :-) All the best and perhaps we shall write again. (messelerpferdchen@yahoo.co.uk).
thanks
outstanding
This story is fantastic! Very hot!
so romantic
it is a beautiful. story and top in my heart
I ve read it twice and could not find a lose strain.
good working
looking for ur more submittions plz write some more
One of My Favorites
There are some stories in this genre that I read over and over; this is one of them. It mixes all of the desired elements, but in the end, is just a love story. My ever-lasting compliments.
What a beautiful, sensual and well-balanced story. I've read this a number of times and each time it gets better. Brilliant story-telling.
Please write more
Incredible
This story is heart breakingly beautiful and really damn erotic at the same time. Thank you so much for writing and sharing!!
What a beautiful tale!
I loved it...FIVE STARS!
More
Please make a part 2
Definitely.
Five stars. Nice and long story. Thanks for a good time.
AWESOME! Part 2, PLEASE!!
Please please please PLEASE write a continuation of this story. I want to read about JESSIE getting pleasured by Diane- who I'm guessing would be a "rookie" at this? This story is SO unfinished! It was absolutely exquisite though!!!
Could have been my story
My name is Diane and I am also a lawyer. It's as if your story is speaking to me.
Just my FANTACY!!! That was amazing
Awesome.
Five stars, voted up because this deserves better than a 4.83. :)
Heavenly
Breathtaking. Gets me incredibly hot every time I read it.
Again...
RedEmerald... I read this story again not too long ago. My god, it left me shivering and so jealous. To think you wrote all five of your stories in 2009 and none since is just... well, those who enjoy your work feel cheated I suppose. That's said with no idea what happened - if you had to or just chose not to write any more.
I'll end with this... thank you so much for writing "Lovers." It's beautiful and so very well done. I do a little writing and I pray one day I'll be as talented as you!
Classic - beautiful
This is one of only three stories on this site that I have read multiple times over the years, and still moves me. This is a classic that will never get old.
amazing
I absolutely love this I ran across it a few years ago and again today. It's beautiful and brings me back to my experiences with my ex girlfriend who left me. Just an amazing story well written. I love it!
Best story ever!
I love this story. I read it a while ago and again today. Well done!
So touching
Firstly, I am so glad to hear your friends are happy together. And secondly, while this was a very sexy story; the structure, plot and sensuality you provided was captivating. Thank you for sharing. And thank 'Jessie' and 'Diane' for letting us hear their love story.
Titilating
Incredible story. The best I have ever read, anywhere, on any site or in any book. You have amazing talent and skill. I could taste and feel every word you wrote. Simply BRILLIANT.
5 stars
I do prefer stories with a man involved but this was great nonetheless! And so very well written, a real pleasure to read.
The best I've read, period!
This was a fascinating read. Much thought and detail without being trashy or vulgar. Tastefully done and I want more..... Please...
Awesome
I really really loved this. the first story i ever read on this site.
Yumm!!
This was an amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed every minute. I couldn't wait to get home to my sexy partner of 6 years and jump her bones! Yumm please write more. The story had me captivated.
Love your story!
What an amazingly hot story! ...and that much of it might be true made it even more exciting. I am so much like a Jessie in my own life and easily find more enjoyment in pleasuring my girlfriend than being on the receiving end. Some day I would love to help my girlfriend at work prepare for a meeting like Jessie helped Diane. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful idea!
Hmmmm
It felt like deja vu reading this. I'm pretty sure I've read the same storie, word for word except for their names on fanfiction.net written for Bella/alice under twilight and rated m. But other than that, awesome story
Well written
I really enjoyed reading this a lot. I'm a straight women and it was hot..
Hot
This story was extremely erotic and romantic. Had me at the edge of my seat, and I'm a straight woman. Good job!
Brilliant!
Amazing
What a well written story. A true one at that. Glad to read the foot note that they are still together. It is so wonderful to be able to feel what others experience. Great job. thanks
Delicious
Incredibly written! Haven't read a good erotica in a long time.
Not sure if I believe it was true though...
hopeful
Because of this story I am now hopeful that I will find love, I can't put into words how I feel at this moment but, this story brought happy tears to my eyes, I don't fully understand why, but I am grateful to have had the privilege of reading this.:-)
a beautiful love story
this was such a pleasure to read.
thank you.
So good
Totally sexy and romantic
From a heterosexual male...
Delicious mind candy...excellent!
I LOVE IT
i loved everything.
Just. Plain. Awesome!
This was a really good read. I am now adding this to my personal collection and I'm now off to have a look at your other stories, too. Kudos! :))
Best story ever
This is the best story I have ever read in my life!
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