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You deserve all the awards.
congrats
Just wanted to thank you for that terrific story. I really enjoyed that. The way you built up the story gradually without letting it get boring was superb. It really touched me. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
My new favorite story
Just a really really great story from start to finish. Thank you so much. When Jessie slipped on the harness, I knew this was the perfect story for me. I wish them all the happiness in the world, and thanks for letting us share their experience!
Oh my god, that was beautiful. Good pacing, writing, story, all of it. The fear of showing emotions and the moment of vulnerability towards the end, too, just make my heart ache in dozens of ways. It's so genuine. Hiigh quality piece of work.
wow, this was beyond amazing. I've been an erotica reader for a long time, but kinda avoided lesbian sections because the stuff you find there is often really bad.
this though; hands down one of the most heartwarming, sexy and all-around great stories. Brilliant!
I'm also happy for the couple. :D If this story is anything to go by they must have amazing sex. :P
wow
Oh my, what a great story. The writing is fabulous. I enjoyed every bit of it
Absolutely wonderful
An amazingly wonderful story. Well written and kept me rivited.
wow
Ummm.....wow
Fantastic love story
I have read and re-read this love story and I only hope that you will keep this story line going. This is a beautiful story, well written and so very erotic. I would love to see this going into the future with main characters experiencing more of their love for each other.
In my own opinion they do not need anyone else but themselves and I think the story line has so much more to give.
Outstanding
Possibly the best story on this site. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful love
Thanks I just was caught up I this till the end and could feel the love. Thank you
Beautiful !
Loved the story, loved them.....was touched and delighted. Thank you.
Really loved it.
That was a beautiful story I loved it
freaking beautiful
i loved the story it's freaking sweet and awesome
Sensational writing
You captured the thoughts and emotions of two people in a challenging situation beautifully. Electrically charged, well-paced, and deliciously sexy throughout. A truly wonderful story, thank you.
Amazing
This is my favorite story I can read it over and over and not get bored. This is a masterpiece beautifully written savoring each day until the end. Just simply amazing!
great
Read numerous times and it just gets better. Do you have a follow up story on the two lovers if so what is the name. Ron. Cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
Beautifully written, highly erotic and an edge of the seat (Like Diane is when Jessie's licking her) tale! Loved every bit and leaked copious amounts!
Insanely erotic!!!
Very well written and for it to be a true story is mind blowing!!
this is one of the best ones i have ever read
Awesome Story!
This is one of the best stories I've ever read...
Amazing
Way couldn't I get a continued story where Diane ..........?.??
A Very good read. I Couldn't stop until the end.
I think I fell in love with your characters while they were falling in love with Each other.
So horny
This turned me on so much I get to the third page trying not to masturbate but gave it it got really hot hehe I love it :3
Oh my god
That was beautiful, and hot, and engaging...just WOW.
This is such a beautiful story
This story is everything I could only dream to have with another woman. I have never been able to find a woman that would love me like these two did. It is all in good time though. This story actually brought me to tears, I wish there was more to read.
Great Writer
I badly need a good read these days; as I was surfing the net for free books I thought maybe I could check out some topics that interests me and not merely random books that some readers suggest. I came across the site and typed lesbian and yours is the most loved story so I clicked it, and I was hooked. The story was sensational, and I was contemplating how beautiful Diane must be for Jessica to do what she did. I, imagining myself in such situation doing the same thing blows my mind.
The best part is, you wrote it vividly that I was surprisingly feeling the emotions in the story as you would perhaps want to convey to your readers. I applaud such writer because more than a beautiful story is a writer's talent to bring that beautiful story to life. Good luck to you! And please write more.
Incredible
I have read your story for the 3rd time and I loved it every single time. You have a way of drawing me into the story. I hope there are more stories to read from you as I can't get enough.
Keep writing as you have a gift.
Alove seldom found but worth it all.
If not the best certainly one of the best love stories I have had the pleasure of reading in any genre. Will enjoy reading more of them. A love such as this is seldom found in any relationship. Makes it all the better.
Keep up the excellent work.
Gordon
well worthy...
of multiple reads...just as good every time...what a love story - thanks!
Sorry for being so graphic...
One of the greatest stories of this site. Had me almost bursting and the floor dripping. Real life tells better stories than the best fiction. A good writer to write them up is still needed, though... a great thanks to the skillfull compilation that has been done.
Love this a lot!
Perhaps it would also be interesting if we see from Diane's perspective!! Can you please write another version through Diane's point of view? :)
Unbelievable
I've now read this story several times and I can still say - OH MY GOD. Easily the best story I've ever read.
Delightfully descriptive and fun! and... DAMN.
SEQUEL
Great story please do a sequel!!!!!!
omg!!!
Wow wow wow. This is one of the most discriptive, sexiest novels I have ever read. I didn't want it to end! Can you do some kind of sequel...from Diane's POV please?. You are truly amazing!
I couldn't stop smiling.😊
Amazing!!
Such a wonderful, beautiful story. I'm so addicted to it..I re-read it every now and then because I love it so much! The writing is great. And the development and emotions of the characters are spot on. I just...it's all so good. There are no words to describe how much I love this story.
This is one of my favorite stories on here. I love to reread it! (:
by far one of the best stories !!!
Absolutely amazing !!!
mmmmm
Ah, oh... the first sight, touch and scent of her accidentally-found panties; the first daring taste of her lips. What a beautifully-told story about the most erotic thing there is: lesbian sex!
It is so good I had to read it again
It was even better this time through.
This is the definition of a love story.
And a darn good tutorial.
thank you
Oh my god. That was a fantastic story!. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing and sharing it.
Re read it again
and it was even better the second time ;)
Most amazing story on Lit!!
I absolutely loved this, has me wanting to be on the boss or employee side! So freaking hot!
Where are you now
Fantastic story = I wish I had found it earlier.......I would love to be (albeit a male} the assistant serving his boss in such a way!!!
Beautiful!
I have just re-read this story. It's still as sweet and touching like the first time I'd read it. Just beautiful! Thank you for sharing with us :)
sequel please
I couldn't stop reading this story everytime I start to read it! even though I have already read it like a thousand tmes!! You really are awesome! Thanks for sharing and I am still hoping that I could read some more from this lovely story before I die!! Fingers cross!!😁
I can't even
You made me feel. I LOVE YOU FOR THAT
Amazing!!!!!
I almost have no words for how erotic and romantic this story was. I was moved and aroused and felt every feeling the two of them felt.
I am so happy this is A true story! It makes me feel even better of the two of them are still together love it! Thank you!
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