RedEmerald, you're a legend when it comes to weaving and cultivating erotica. This story has got to be one of my all time favourites and will always be an absolute pleasure to read. Myself and many others who have read this also appreciate the notes you've added which state the trueness of the story and the fact (at the time of your writing) that the two characters were still together after ten years.
It's been a while since you've posted and we'd love to read another of your pieces, but even if that's not possible, rest assured that we'll always remember you! :D
I was totally wrapped up in the story, the sex was excellent, and best of all it left me feeling very happy. An additional note: at no time was I distracted by bad grammar, misspellings, left over editing choices, etc. Congratulations to you and your editor.
by
Anonymous06/13/15
Wow Girl! _ That's A Beautiful Story.
But this is only chapter 1. What happens when Jessica and Diane got back to the U.S., did Jessica stay on as Diane's assistant? Where's chapter 2???
Well it appears the author has left the building!!
Gay Kat.
by
Anonymous06/26/15
Please
Dear RedEmerald,
I have been reading this story again and again for the past few years. ( how desperated does that sound like!:)) I really love this story a lot. Is it possible that you can write some more???? Thank you anyway.
by
Anonymous06/27/15
The depth of love
This was a deeply moving story, it gripped my senses with emotion. It makes me wish that I was female so that I could savour in this type of deep loving. Rabee
by
Anonymous07/06/15
PART 2
wanna know how they're doing EPILOGUE!!!!!!
by
Anonymous07/13/15
Loved it
This was a really good dyory I enjoyed it a lot I hope you write a part 2 for these two :)
by
Anonymous07/21/15
Well done!
I am pleased with a story when at its end I'm smiling; I was grinning when I finished yours.
by
Anonymous07/24/15
GREAT
Just as every other reader who read this amazingly beautiful story. i am waiting for more from you. i love your work, it doesnt have to be a part two maybe a teacher student one or something. PLEASE create more stories i know you still have it in you.thanks
by
Anonymous07/24/15
Wonderul
you write beautifully and I was gripped to the end. Congratulations on having a wonderful talent.
by
Anonymous08/04/15
Wow
I can't even begin to count the number of times I have read this story! It is so well written that you actually can envision the physical intimacy and relate to the sexual responses. The story leaves you hungering for more. It leaves the reader desiring for a similar relationship! Very well done!
by
Anonymous08/06/15
Sequel
Can you write a sequel to this story? I would love to find out what happens next.
by
Anonymous08/11/15
wet and exostted
Came so much by reading this great story
by
Anonymous08/22/15
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
What a wonderful story, and just so well-written; please give us an update
This,is a heart warmer in written form.it will be my substitute for hot chocolate in cold winter nights to warm me up.thank you and the people who inspired it for a nice read!
by
Anonymous09/04/15
Exquisite!
Reading erotic literature is fun and tittilating. Reading this story however, was a very intense and erotic experience.....thank you!
A wonderful true account of two people finding each other and finding love. Lovely to know they have stayed together. Jessica is a real heroine, selflessly risking her own well being to do the best for Diane. I am sure both ladies are delighted with how you honoured them in writing their story ..... very touching and heartwarming.
Even being a submissive man, there is such beauty in this story, such intimacy, it's rare to find a partner like these two have found with one another. Thank You both so much and so happy to hear that you'll are still together. ~ boy William
by
Anonymous11/16/15
I hated this story, just killed my mood
by
Anonymous11/19/15
i so so so loved it! the progression and all...
by
Anonymous12/02/15
No lawyers were harmed.
Loved the story - well told - hot- good grammar. Laughed out loud at your lawyer rem ark-they are often horses-a'ses , worse than the horses in the movies. [guess what profession I retired from] [from which I retired?] I just couldn't take the lack of ethics any more. Enuf ranting. Great ***** story. Thank you.
by
Anonymous12/09/15
Brilliant
I loved the story, couldn't stop reading once started.
If you're not a professional writer you could be. The characters, the sex scenes and the final love scene were beautifully rendered. Thank you.
by
Anonymous01/01/16
DUDE! You're on a porn site!
On the world wide web. Nobody believes a word coming out of your mouth! Drop the "true story" crap and try and write an original or clever story. This ain't it.
This story, to me, is an interest fantasy, but I feel that in real life the 2 ladies would have been discovered. I accompanied a friend to an industrial tribunal, & he was dismissed for a similar activity.
I read this on one of my earliest visits to this site. So memorable, and well worth the re-read. Its been years, but its attracted so much attention. I wish there were more like this.
by
Anonymous02/16/16
!!!!!!
Loved the story, well done!
by
Anonymous02/17/16
Now that is how to write erotica!
I have read a lot of stories on this website and this is one of the best. Great descriptions, build up and of course, climax (s).
by
Anonymous02/22/16
Infinitely wonderful.
No, seriously. I love this story. I want everyone in the world to read this story, and feel some connection to its intensity, passion, and devotion.
Oh! I can't say how deeply this touched me.
Thank you so very much for sharing this with us.
by
Anonymous03/06/16
Still
It's been years since I found out this website. And I have to say this is definitely the best. You are the reason I keep coming back because I am still hoping and waiting that you would share more beautiful stories to us.
Your Asian reader x
by
Anonymous03/06/16
Hi
Hi RedEmerald,
Could you please let us know how you are doing?
You never reply to any of the comments, just wanted to make sure you are well.
by
Anonymous03/09/16
Absolutely a wonderfully erotic story. No need for all the porno words, etc., to have as great a story as this. Plot was great, grammar was great. Couldn't find anything wrong with it.
by
Anonymous03/19/16
Anonym
Wow!!!!
Very well written.
by
Anonymous03/24/16
still the best
Have reread this story I don't know how many times, most times just for the story itself. I can't get over the progress that this love moves at. It's perfect.
by
Anonymous05/14/16
Awesome
Could you please do the story again but from Diane's point of view it would be awesome I've never read a more erotic and lovely story thank you so much for writing it.
by
Anonymous06/04/16
Plz do another from Diane's view. Amazing
by
Anonymous06/20/16
wonderful story! what completely authentic characters!
Thank you for this wonderful story -- please give us more!
Dear sweet lord
Romantic and forbidden and seductive. This is my favorite.
Amazing even after so many reads...
RedEmerald, you're a legend when it comes to weaving and cultivating erotica. This story has got to be one of my all time favourites and will always be an absolute pleasure to read. Myself and many others who have read this also appreciate the notes you've added which state the trueness of the story and the fact (at the time of your writing) that the two characters were still together after ten years.
It's been a while since you've posted and we'd love to read another of your pieces, but even if that's not possible, rest assured that we'll always remember you! :D
Fascinating story and well told.
amazing
please make another story it's not too late. you are amazing writer and I love love love this story
You achieved your goals!
I was totally wrapped up in the story, the sex was excellent, and best of all it left me feeling very happy. An additional note: at no time was I distracted by bad grammar, misspellings, left over editing choices, etc. Congratulations to you and your editor.
Wow Girl! _ That's A Beautiful Story.
But this is only chapter 1. What happens when Jessica and Diane got back to the U.S., did Jessica stay on as Diane's assistant? Where's chapter 2???
Well it appears the author has left the building!!
Gay Kat.
Please
Dear RedEmerald,
I have been reading this story again and again for the past few years. ( how desperated does that sound like!:)) I really love this story a lot. Is it possible that you can write some more???? Thank you anyway.
The depth of love
This was a deeply moving story, it gripped my senses with emotion. It makes me wish that I was female so that I could savour in this type of deep loving. Rabee
PART 2
wanna know how they're doing EPILOGUE!!!!!!
Loved it
This was a really good dyory I enjoyed it a lot I hope you write a part 2 for these two :)
Well done!
I am pleased with a story when at its end I'm smiling; I was grinning when I finished yours.
GREAT
Just as every other reader who read this amazingly beautiful story. i am waiting for more from you. i love your work, it doesnt have to be a part two maybe a teacher student one or something. PLEASE create more stories i know you still have it in you.thanks
Wonderul
you write beautifully and I was gripped to the end. Congratulations on having a wonderful talent.
Wow
I can't even begin to count the number of times I have read this story! It is so well written that you actually can envision the physical intimacy and relate to the sexual responses. The story leaves you hungering for more. It leaves the reader desiring for a similar relationship! Very well done!
Sequel
Can you write a sequel to this story? I would love to find out what happens next.
wet and exostted
Came so much by reading this great story
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
What a wonderful story, and just so well-written; please give us an update
Thanks
This,is a heart warmer in written form.it will be my substitute for hot chocolate in cold winter nights to warm me up.thank you and the people who inspired it for a nice read!
Exquisite!
Reading erotic literature is fun and tittilating. Reading this story however, was a very intense and erotic experience.....thank you!
keep coming back
I've read this many times and just LOVE it. Thank you for submitting it and thanks to the ladies that inspired it.
Diane's side
great story. i'd love to read it from Diane's point of view and know more about her background.
100% love
Love this story # i want to read more
Sweet spot
I come back to this story when I feel the yearning of love and lust. Its so sweet.
T. East coast
Wow, just wow...
Best story I've read on this site!
beautiful discovering
A wonderful true account of two people finding each other and finding love. Lovely to know they have stayed together. Jessica is a real heroine, selflessly risking her own well being to do the best for Diane. I am sure both ladies are delighted with how you honoured them in writing their story ..... very touching and heartwarming.
Perfect!
I just loved this story so much! Truly amazing and incredibly erotic!
Wonderful writing
Even being a submissive man, there is such beauty in this story, such intimacy, it's rare to find a partner like these two have found with one another. Thank You both so much and so happy to hear that you'll are still together. ~ boy William
I hated this story, just killed my mood
i so so so loved it! the progression and all...
No lawyers were harmed.
Loved the story - well told - hot- good grammar. Laughed out loud at your lawyer rem ark-they are often horses-a'ses , worse than the horses in the movies. [guess what profession I retired from] [from which I retired?] I just couldn't take the lack of ethics any more. Enuf ranting. Great ***** story. Thank you.
Brilliant
I loved the story, couldn't stop reading once started.
Wow!
If you're not a professional writer you could be. The characters, the sex scenes and the final love scene were beautifully rendered. Thank you.
DUDE! You're on a porn site!
On the world wide web. Nobody believes a word coming out of your mouth! Drop the "true story" crap and try and write an original or clever story. This ain't it.
Favors returned
Will the favors ever be returned
\
Fantasy
This story, to me, is an interest fantasy, but I feel that in real life the 2 ladies would have been discovered. I accompanied a friend to an industrial tribunal, & he was dismissed for a similar activity.
One of my first
I read this on one of my earliest visits to this site. So memorable, and well worth the re-read. Its been years, but its attracted so much attention. I wish there were more like this.
!!!!!!
Loved the story, well done!
Now that is how to write erotica!
I have read a lot of stories on this website and this is one of the best. Great descriptions, build up and of course, climax (s).
Infinitely wonderful.
No, seriously. I love this story. I want everyone in the world to read this story, and feel some connection to its intensity, passion, and devotion.
Oh! I can't say how deeply this touched me.
Thank you so very much for sharing this with us.
Still
It's been years since I found out this website. And I have to say this is definitely the best. You are the reason I keep coming back because I am still hoping and waiting that you would share more beautiful stories to us.
Your Asian reader x
Hi
Hi RedEmerald,
Could you please let us know how you are doing?
You never reply to any of the comments, just wanted to make sure you are well.
Absolutely a wonderfully erotic story. No need for all the porno words, etc., to have as great a story as this. Plot was great, grammar was great. Couldn't find anything wrong with it.
Anonym
Wow!!!!
Very well written.
still the best
Have reread this story I don't know how many times, most times just for the story itself. I can't get over the progress that this love moves at. It's perfect.
Awesome
Could you please do the story again but from Diane's point of view it would be awesome I've never read a more erotic and lovely story thank you so much for writing it.
Plz do another from Diane's view. Amazing
wonderful story! what completely authentic characters!
Thank you for this wonderful story -- please give us more!
Bravo!!!
One of the best stories I've read in a long time. Diane and Jessica are so authentic and you did an incredible job telling their story. Thank you.
Best Story Ever!
Yes! More of this please. More of Diane and Jessie!
One of the best lesbian stories that I have ever read. Shame that it appears this author no longer writes and posts here on Literotica.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Lovers Without Realizing It or
More submissions by RedEmerald.