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by midnightfalcon

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orvette1orvette1about 15 years ago
Good

This was good. I hope you keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Crap

'Brad', 'I', Brad, 'I', pick a fucking point of view and stick with it, and learn how to spell and use punctuation; half the time I didn't have a fucking clue who was talking, and pretty soon I didn't care. 1*, improve or leave.

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