Nice piece. Storyline believable erotic rather than graphic. Keep writing
so hot.....more please! sooner the better. maybe she could join them at home?
Wonderful. Keep up the good work.
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Nice piece
Nice piece. Storyline believable erotic rather than graphic.
Keep writing
hot!
so hot.....more please! sooner the better. maybe she could join them at home?
You've got talent
Wonderful. Keep up the good work.
You've got talent
Wonderful. Keep up the good work.
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