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The Picnic Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/06/09

Jelena's Enslavement

Please, More of J's continued humiliation,Perhaps some degrading chores for her co-workers in effort to earn a facial from Mr.E

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by tameez04/18/09

More!

Amazing story! More of Jelena plz!

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by Anonymous07/31/09

WOW

Brilliant!

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by LadyParts12/01/10

Totally hot

That was a great series. So hot.. so wet... mmmmm.

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by Anonymous01/21/11

You had something going with the little girl

You had something going with the little girl talk. You should stay with that type of situation. She should dress as a a little girl for now on.

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