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by Frankly Speaking03/18/09

It's to not too

Very good, hot story that held together. However, check your grammar as it puts me off when I read it and it's so obviously wrong. That cost you a point from me.

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by Anonymous03/18/09

the length

of the story is rather a joke compared with a novel. so it missed quite a bit of explanations. short and dirty like a pornflick and therfore nothing above average. nobody gets a clue why, who....like I come to your house go to the kitchen make a sandwich and eat it and everything is ok. I have never been at your house and you don't even know me but well everything seems as it would be commen to do so. but it isn't so there needs to be some explanations why, how come?

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