Well this is a well written story and beats the hell out of the cuck stories in this section. Is he a wimp? possibly, but the husband maybe dying and you know that saying? "The better the devil you know?" Well this applies here. Annie I guess will go her own way or ened up as some kind of sister to Drew and Paige as well. I am not sure I could forgive someone for having a six month affair even if they did prove they still loved me. Of course he could have both of them at the same time! Anyway looking forward to the next chapter.
I particularly liked what Annie said: "Good people make bad mistakes every day. It's how they redeem themselves that matters in the end."
I was never of the opinion that marriages should always stay intact despite egregious actions of their partner.
But, on the other hand, is redemption never possible? Is it not possible that someone can sin and truly regret it? That even living a faultless life afterwards will never atone for having sinned?
I find that a very bleak outlook on life.
Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous03/19/09
Only wimps can forgive?!?!?!??
Too many readers believe only wimps forgive. I disagree, it takes alot to forgive someone the hurts they have caused. The real wimps arethose afraid to forgive, those who hold onto their judgmental mentality and to compare Hitler to a cheating spouse??? Quit smoking the chronic
by the short chapter. If you haven't finished this story then it's fine. I think Drew is going to survive the cancer & will take Paige back as his wife. Annie & Paige must have decided about it in the hospital so Annie got out of the picture. Given all the circumstances, I guess story is going that way. Waiting to see what's going to happen next & hope the next one is not so short.
by the short chapter. If you haven't finished this story then it's fine. I think Drew is going to survive the cancer & will take Paige back as his wife. Annie & Paige must have decided about it in the hospital so Annie got out of the picture. Given all the circumstances, I guess story is going that way. Waiting to see what's going to happen next & hope the next one is not so short.
Excellent flow. Nice play off of the charaters against each other.
Of course Paige is still a cheating slut. Hopefully he survives and ends up with Anne.
Thank you for a deeply emotional story!I hope they can get back together and that somehow he beats the cancer(as I have).
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Anonymous03/19/09
REDEMTION
HOPE IT ISN'T FINISHED LOOKING FORWARD TO A TWIST AND AT LEAST ANOTHER LONG CHAPTER.
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Anonymous03/19/09
Good, but....
as a reader, I get the feeling you are dragging this out, perhaps for the rush you get from reading comments after every chapter. It lessens the pleasure of the story. Most of us can handle three page chapters, at least. We don't have a Navy Seal in this story, so we use the "sick with cancer" device. Nothing drives home the love of a wayward women like seeing her first love die. So guys, keep that in mind. Want to get revenge on the cheating slut? Go get some horrible disease, or have a crippling accident. That'll show 'em!
The author continues to use Drew's cancer as an excuse so that any meaningful conversation between Paige and Drew never occurs and thus ANY reconciliation -- even if it's just as friends-- seems absurd. I have not read such shallow dialogue and interaction between husband and wife in a serious LW story since the old stories of Blue88.!
The conversations between Paige and Drew in this chapter shows a wife is STILL really fucked up in the head and apparently is incapable of rational thought. Even worse is the husbands perpetual self-flagellation when he did absolutely nothing wrong in a marriage or or the relationship was justified Paige long term emotional and sexual affair with Alan. Twice in this wretched chapter Drew is directly blaming himself for causing/contributing to Paige's affair. Really it is quite revolting.
Take this bit the conversation. "Why do you keep mentioning him? Drew, don't you think if I'd wanted to be with Alan instead of you, I could have been with him these past two years?"
Um maybe because you fucked Alan for 6 months while shutting down your husband? Hello McFly?!
Even more absurd is that Paige admits she had been hoping that over the last two years she wanted Drw to take her back ...even though she had no contact with Drew! Apparently she is operating under the impression that Drew is a mind reader.
Finally the issue is not whether or not any reconciliation is or is not justified. It is NOT my place to say. Sure I have an opinion on this But after all this author's story.
The ultimate issue for me is that the author HAS to address the main point of contention from Chapter 1. When Paige learned what was bothering Drew why he under such stress -- that there might be layoffs company -- Paige STILL continued her affair with Alan. The self centered cow can NOW say in sickness and in health blah blah blah but 2 + years ago Drew was in trouble she cheated on him and ignored him then didnt stop.
Until THAT point is discussed and resolved anything else is BS
Enough facts to string us along and maintain the attention of the readers. If you do not like short chapters wait until the whole story has been published. The question of forgiveness is far from the most important, the question of trust is far more difficult to resolve, and frequently both love and lust are very sensitive to the trust factor.
It seems strange that Harry to complain about his questioning her about why she did not stay with Alan. Remember he read her journal and apparently the only new event was Drew's decision to divorce her, so it does seem to me to be a normal question since for many it would be the natural answer to his gambit. Also don't forget he is trying to take care of her in the future which makes a nice counterpoint to her taking care of him now... Of course. apparently the divorce is leaking... My thanks to the author, who seems to be relatively new on the site and may not know about our peculiar reactions to stories....
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Anonymous03/19/09
Bottom rate!
Here is a selection from one of the most stupid paragraphs in Literotica –EVER!!! “…I hadn't exactly given Paige any chances to redeem herself after her affair, but hell, she could have forced the issue if she'd wanted. Maybe all of this was God's way of punishing me for that while giving Paige her chance to repent….There were times I hadn't been understanding and possibly even harsh. Maybe God was punishing me for not being a better husband. Who knew?...” Get it? Good, because it’s Gibberish to me. She cheated on him then when he is about to die she feels guilty and sorry for him and herself and he? He feels guilty too! LOL. And Now they are playing THE REDEEMED SINNER TURNED HOLY NURSE and PATIENT game. It has NOTHING to do with how or why she behaved towards him as a wife. This is a pure HUMANITARIAN thing ANYONE would do for ANY sick person. Using REDEMPTION and GOD is an insult to religion and HAS NOTHING to do with the way she treated him when they were married. This MUST be another author!
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Anonymous03/19/09
very melodramatic
please let the poor guy die in peace. he had a wife who just liked to play away. he has a girlfriend who can't have sex at all because of her past. he has cancer and a lot of medication so he won't be able to have sex at all. so please let him die in peace and the feeling there are 2 women who love me. otherwise he has to find out he can't satisfy his ex-wife anyway. he could not when he was healthy. a little bit of stamina he would have again after he would be cured but with his girlfriend there would never be any contact at all. so please be merciful and give him a rest.
Well written. Smooth flow. The main characters bring out an ex husband and wife interaction that is different from anything I have experienced in life or seen in others. However, just because it is different from my life and preferences does not mean it is not a good story. Amusing that anonymous below says one of the story paragraphs is the worst ever on this site because it is unintelligible, and Harryin VA says the shallow dialogue and interaction between husband and wife is the worst ever. Amazing exaggerations given some of the awful stuff that has been published here. Only goes to show you how some of us are really commenting on our own narrowness and not on the story.
I was a bit surprised to see a story by you after so long but I hope this doesn't end up as one of the never finished stories on the site that just leave the reader hanging...
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Anonymous04/23/09
1st rate
a compelling story
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Anonymous04/28/09
Love it
I will be waiting for chapter 4. So far I love it, just enough suffering and pity. I will be looking for more work from you. Thanks
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Anonymous05/20/09
Good to hear from you again
This is a good story, although the situation you chose to write about didn't really lend itself to "erotic" moments. Regarding the ex-wife's journal as a tool for advancing the plot, I don't think it is believable that someone, particularly a married woman, would go into detail in a journal concerning the sex they had with a lover. If she recorded evidence of such acts at all it would probably just be a brief coded reference like "saw him today". Frankly, I don't see much point in continuing this story. That said, let me add that I loved your story "Innocent Sins", and I very much hope you will post more stories like it. Thanks for taking the trouble to share, and I hope the terminal cancer patient idea is not autobiographical.
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Anonymous05/20/09
More?
Very enjoyable. Stirred up plenty of emotion. Is there another chapter? Indeed, what about Annie? Thanks for writing.
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Anonymous05/31/09
Beautifully written Story
Well written story. Drew may have terminal cancer, but He still has two attractive women anxious to be nurse maids to him. Heartwarming story, but I do wish you would give Drew half a brain. I get so tired of braindead husbands, I can almost understand why weak willed wives end up cheating on them.
the Ct. Yankee
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Anonymous06/05/09
The "Bottom rate!" signer has it wrong.
It is a shame that God, any God, all Gods are stuck with being interpreted and defined by mere humans, most often to suit themselves. "Bottom rate!" appears to be a good example of that. H'mmn, Both God (if God there be) and humans are far more complex entities than "Bottom rate!" comprehends.
Given how long its been since the author's previous posts I hope this is in no way autobiographical. Next I hope he writes and posts the rest of it.
People as individuals and as a group continuously vacillate through the realm of human possibility. What that means is that we are all capable of all levels of any human condition without any forewarning. Any of us can be good and evil, stupid and intelligent and any other pair of opposed human traits simultaneously.
-- srgeek --
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Anonymous06/23/09
MY WORST FEARS CAME TRUE
The wife is a selfish stupid lying cunt. The husband can't father any children because he obviously has not ball what so ever. Did you actually read the last 1/2 page of dialogue that you wrote? What crap!! Some of your stuff is so good but this is just shit published under your name. Justify the entire story by explaining that he also had cancer in his brain and is just insane/stupid. You cannot paint an antagonist with such a "black brush" and they expect the readers to accept them at a "white character" in the end. It is like writing a murder mystery and they making the killer a characher that you introduced in the last paragraph.
This is a great story. I'd love to see another chapter and find out what happened to them. Don't take the criticism too seriously from the crowd that always thinks you should never forgive a woman. I thought your story was very realistic. Thanks. --Jim
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Anonymous09/08/09
Not bad
I got really tired with the ex-husband's whining and constant doubts. After he read the journals he should have realized that Paige still loved him and always did. He was a wimp in that he was so unforgiving of what she had done and so whiny about his cancer. Not much of a person in my book. Most cancer patients and war-damaged vets get over that self-pity and live life to the fullest because they realize they have no choice but to live fully each day they have left with their condition. Screw all you wimps out there that have never done anything wrong or cheated on your spouse. Over half of you are out and out hypocritical liars as regards the cheating! Most of you could not get and do not have wives as beautiful and loving as Paige was described! Get a real life and quit condemning these authors who are all braver and more talented then you sickos! Ron Wood Roswell, NM
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Anonymous11/12/09
Good!!!!
Story for Readers Digest!!!.
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Anonymous11/12/09
With a friend/wife like this, who needs enemies?
Loses his job, dying of cancer and wife makes his day by fucking another guy, long term. And some commentators don't like the husband character for being too whiney and then unforgiving of the wife?? WTF?? What does she really have to do, to qualify as a REALLY BAD WIFE? KILL HIM WITH A CHAIN SAW AND THEN EAT HIM? I mean he lost his job and got cancer and she betrays him too?? Who cares what screwed up thoughts might have been going through her twisted mind that she came up with in therapy or put to paper in her journal. They couldn't justify her actions in any respect. Yes, the husband should be understanding. Understand that when he loses both his livelihood and probably his life via long slow death, he can count on his wife's betrayal and then unending drama too. When you got nothing, you got nothing to lose. If this Drama Queen don't qualify for torch the bitch who would? The idea of the husband being nice to his ex-piece-of-crap in the least here is ridiculous. What we'd all like to see for a last chapter is Paige waiting on Drew hand and foot, night and day, performing all sorts of miserable tasks, and even paying for his terminal medical care for the last year of his of his life and when Drew's dying and on his death bed, while Paige waits for her anticipated $1 Million, Drew whispers in her ear, "Punked, I stopped paying on the policy years ago when I saw you with Alan."
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Anonymous11/15/09
That's it?
Good story but it needs to be finished. Too many possible endings.
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Anonymous11/26/09
horrible
horrible story one minute he's dead the next they don't know. I think your trying to please to many readers and in the end your story and you are just stupid.
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Anonymous11/26/09
I agree with Ron Wood on the story; not bad
Too many readers do not understand that they are reading a structured, at least mostly, story of characters and events. This must be the reason for the rants and hate messages on LW tales. I'm constantly amazed at the hate shown to women in these stories. As R Wood said, way too many of these stories feature a weak, indecisive male with little or no humanity in his character. The male is too often cast as a clueless nerd, coupled with an NFL cheerleader-quality wife. Time to get real about life, unless the aim is a totally unlimited fantasy.
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Anonymous12/15/09
Enjoyable reading
Certainly there are several places to point out errors, but overall that story made me think about that situation. That says a lot for the story.Thanks for sharing. anon jerry
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Anonymous12/21/09
Very well written and enjoyable.
Glad to see you back writing, as long as you don`t write any more stories like the ones from 2001, slut wife and wimp husband. Your recent stories are destined to be classics. This story doesn`t seem finished - more to come I hope.
Retribution, Redemption and Reconciliation aren't always bad together when they appear in the same story. I hope all three of the main characters find happiness along the way. It was a good story with sympathetic characters!
I once asked the author (not as 'curiousss') if he was going to finish this story...
...and he said to give him time. He'd had such bad reviews that he'd given up.
Well, after 30 months I guess I'll take this off my stories to be checked occasionally for updates.
It's a shame really. I noted Harry's comments and his comments were right really, but only for him and maybe most of you.
However, I had a slightly different take on it. Paige did a horrible thing in betraying Drew like she did, but the author paints her as being real, remorseful, penitent, certainly guilty but, above all, she loves him. She never really realized exactly how much until he wasn't there with her.
I loved the line from Annie "It's how they redeem themselves that matters in the end."
That's the way I feel and I think this author is very perceptive and empathetic.
It's sad that he hasn't posted anything else since this chapter, possibly from bad reviews and/or lack of encouragement.
Well, I enjoyed the story and I wish you'd write more, including finishing this, one of the best LW stories I've read.
If not, best wishes anyway and thank you for the stories I've enjoyed.
are the reason LW is full of banal cuck stories. Cuckolds of all stripes work hard to drive talented authors out of the category so their brand of drivel can reign supreme. This author specifically pointed to feedback for no longer submitting; great news for wannabe cucks everywhere. Don't fool yourselves cuckys; you creampie slurping misanthropes with your incessant denials might salve your own tortured psyches but the rest of us recognize your true agenda: driving out good writers to make room for the type of story you love to read, spank off to, then flame. If I had the chance I'd fuck your holes but will just have to settle for telling you to fuck yourselves. Assholes.
English
The only good thing. . .
. . .about this story is that there are no children. It's important that wimps do not breed.
I'm still reading
I do not know how well I like it, it has its strong and weak points as a story, but I am curious to see where it goes. I'm still reading
What's with all the short chapters???
Let's wrap this up a little quicker if you please. And, oh yeah, nice story. Too bad he's all wrapped up in himself.
Tail End Pete
Be able to redeem herself after a 6 month affair?
Oh I get it now. We just didn't give Hitler a good enough chance to redeem himself.
Be able to redeem herself after a 6 month affair?
Oh I get it now. We just didn't give Hitler a good enough chance to redeem himself.
Some good some bad.
Well this is a well written story and beats the hell out of the cuck stories in this section. Is he a wimp? possibly, but the husband maybe dying and you know that saying? "The better the devil you know?" Well this applies here. Annie I guess will go her own way or ened up as some kind of sister to Drew and Paige as well. I am not sure I could forgive someone for having a six month affair even if they did prove they still loved me. Of course he could have both of them at the same time! Anyway looking forward to the next chapter.
Not perfect but I like it
I particularly liked what Annie said: "Good people make bad mistakes every day. It's how they redeem themselves that matters in the end."
I was never of the opinion that marriages should always stay intact despite egregious actions of their partner.
But, on the other hand, is redemption never possible? Is it not possible that someone can sin and truly regret it? That even living a faultless life afterwards will never atone for having sinned?
I find that a very bleak outlook on life.
Thanks for sharing.
Only wimps can forgive?!?!?!??
Too many readers believe only wimps forgive. I disagree, it takes alot to forgive someone the hurts they have caused. The real wimps arethose afraid to forgive, those who hold onto their judgmental mentality and to compare Hitler to a cheating spouse??? Quit smoking the chronic
First rate
This really is first rate story telling.
little disappointed.
by the short chapter. If you haven't finished this story then it's fine. I think Drew is going to survive the cancer & will take Paige back as his wife. Annie & Paige must have decided about it in the hospital so Annie got out of the picture. Given all the circumstances, I guess story is going that way. Waiting to see what's going to happen next & hope the next one is not so short.
little disappointed.
by the short chapter. If you haven't finished this story then it's fine. I think Drew is going to survive the cancer & will take Paige back as his wife. Annie & Paige must have decided about it in the hospital so Annie got out of the picture. Given all the circumstances, I guess story is going that way. Waiting to see what's going to happen next & hope the next one is not so short.
top notch story
Excellent flow. Nice play off of the charaters against each other.
Of course Paige is still a cheating slut. Hopefully he survives and ends up with Anne.
A lovely story!
Thank you for a deeply emotional story!I hope they can get back together and that somehow he beats the cancer(as I have).
REDEMTION
HOPE IT ISN'T FINISHED LOOKING FORWARD TO A TWIST AND AT LEAST ANOTHER LONG CHAPTER.
Good, but....
as a reader, I get the feeling you are dragging this out, perhaps for the rush you get from reading comments after every chapter. It lessens the pleasure of the story. Most of us can handle three page chapters, at least. We don't have a Navy Seal in this story, so we use the "sick with cancer" device. Nothing drives home the love of a wayward women like seeing her first love die. So guys, keep that in mind. Want to get revenge on the cheating slut? Go get some horrible disease, or have a crippling accident. That'll show 'em!
Reconcialtion revolves around 1 Key issue
The author continues to use Drew's cancer as an excuse so that any meaningful conversation between Paige and Drew never occurs and thus ANY reconciliation -- even if it's just as friends-- seems absurd. I have not read such shallow dialogue and interaction between husband and wife in a serious LW story since the old stories of Blue88.!
The conversations between Paige and Drew in this chapter shows a wife is STILL really fucked up in the head and apparently is incapable of rational thought. Even worse is the husbands perpetual self-flagellation when he did absolutely nothing wrong in a marriage or or the relationship was justified Paige long term emotional and sexual affair with Alan. Twice in this wretched chapter Drew is directly blaming himself for causing/contributing to Paige's affair. Really it is quite revolting.
Take this bit the conversation. "Why do you keep mentioning him? Drew, don't you think if I'd wanted to be with Alan instead of you, I could have been with him these past two years?"
Um maybe because you fucked Alan for 6 months while shutting down your husband? Hello McFly?!
Even more absurd is that Paige admits she had been hoping that over the last two years she wanted Drw to take her back ...even though she had no contact with Drew! Apparently she is operating under the impression that Drew is a mind reader.
Finally the issue is not whether or not any reconciliation is or is not justified. It is NOT my place to say. Sure I have an opinion on this But after all this author's story.
The ultimate issue for me is that the author HAS to address the main point of contention from Chapter 1. When Paige learned what was bothering Drew why he under such stress -- that there might be layoffs company -- Paige STILL continued her affair with Alan. The self centered cow can NOW say in sickness and in health blah blah blah but 2 + years ago Drew was in trouble she cheated on him and ignored him then didnt stop.
Until THAT point is discussed and resolved anything else is BS
Good Chapter
Enough facts to string us along and maintain the attention of the readers. If you do not like short chapters wait until the whole story has been published. The question of forgiveness is far from the most important, the question of trust is far more difficult to resolve, and frequently both love and lust are very sensitive to the trust factor.
It seems strange that Harry to complain about his questioning her about why she did not stay with Alan. Remember he read her journal and apparently the only new event was Drew's decision to divorce her, so it does seem to me to be a normal question since for many it would be the natural answer to his gambit. Also don't forget he is trying to take care of her in the future which makes a nice counterpoint to her taking care of him now... Of course. apparently the divorce is leaking... My thanks to the author, who seems to be relatively new on the site and may not know about our peculiar reactions to stories....
Bottom rate!
Here is a selection from one of the most stupid paragraphs in Literotica –EVER!!! “…I hadn't exactly given Paige any chances to redeem herself after her affair, but hell, she could have forced the issue if she'd wanted. Maybe all of this was God's way of punishing me for that while giving Paige her chance to repent….There were times I hadn't been understanding and possibly even harsh. Maybe God was punishing me for not being a better husband. Who knew?...” Get it? Good, because it’s Gibberish to me. She cheated on him then when he is about to die she feels guilty and sorry for him and herself and he? He feels guilty too! LOL. And Now they are playing THE REDEEMED SINNER TURNED HOLY NURSE and PATIENT game. It has NOTHING to do with how or why she behaved towards him as a wife. This is a pure HUMANITARIAN thing ANYONE would do for ANY sick person. Using REDEMPTION and GOD is an insult to religion and HAS NOTHING to do with the way she treated him when they were married. This MUST be another author!
very melodramatic
please let the poor guy die in peace. he had a wife who just liked to play away. he has a girlfriend who can't have sex at all because of her past. he has cancer and a lot of medication so he won't be able to have sex at all. so please let him die in peace and the feeling there are 2 women who love me. otherwise he has to find out he can't satisfy his ex-wife anyway. he could not when he was healthy. a little bit of stamina he would have again after he would be cured but with his girlfriend there would never be any contact at all. so please be merciful and give him a rest.
Great chapter
Well written. Smooth flow. The main characters bring out an ex husband and wife interaction that is different from anything I have experienced in life or seen in others. However, just because it is different from my life and preferences does not mean it is not a good story. Amusing that anonymous below says one of the story paragraphs is the worst ever on this site because it is unintelligible, and Harryin VA says the shallow dialogue and interaction between husband and wife is the worst ever. Amazing exaggerations given some of the awful stuff that has been published here. Only goes to show you how some of us are really commenting on our own narrowness and not on the story.
Waiting for a new chapter
I was a bit surprised to see a story by you after so long but I hope this doesn't end up as one of the never finished stories on the site that just leave the reader hanging...
1st rate
a compelling story
Love it
I will be waiting for chapter 4. So far I love it, just enough suffering and pity. I will be looking for more work from you. Thanks
Good to hear from you again
This is a good story, although the situation you chose to write about didn't really lend itself to "erotic" moments. Regarding the ex-wife's journal as a tool for advancing the plot, I don't think it is believable that someone, particularly a married woman, would go into detail in a journal concerning the sex they had with a lover. If she recorded evidence of such acts at all it would probably just be a brief coded reference like "saw him today". Frankly, I don't see much point in continuing this story. That said, let me add that I loved your story "Innocent Sins", and I very much hope you will post more stories like it. Thanks for taking the trouble to share, and I hope the terminal cancer patient idea is not autobiographical.
More?
Very enjoyable. Stirred up plenty of emotion. Is there another chapter? Indeed, what about Annie? Thanks for writing.
Beautifully written Story
Well written story. Drew may have terminal cancer, but He still has two attractive women anxious to be nurse maids to him. Heartwarming story, but I do wish you would give Drew half a brain. I get so tired of braindead husbands, I can almost understand why weak willed wives end up cheating on them.
the Ct. Yankee
The "Bottom rate!" signer has it wrong.
It is a shame that God, any God, all Gods are stuck with being interpreted and defined by mere humans, most often to suit themselves. "Bottom rate!" appears to be a good example of that. H'mmn, Both God (if God there be) and humans are far more complex entities than "Bottom rate!" comprehends.
Given how long its been since the author's previous posts I hope this is in no way autobiographical. Next I hope he writes and posts the rest of it.
People as individuals and as a group continuously vacillate through the realm of human possibility. What that means is that we are all capable of all levels of any human condition without any forewarning. Any of us can be good and evil, stupid and intelligent and any other pair of opposed human traits simultaneously.
-- srgeek --
MY WORST FEARS CAME TRUE
The wife is a selfish stupid lying cunt. The husband can't father any children because he obviously has not ball what so ever. Did you actually read the last 1/2 page of dialogue that you wrote? What crap!! Some of your stuff is so good but this is just shit published under your name. Justify the entire story by explaining that he also had cancer in his brain and is just insane/stupid. You cannot paint an antagonist with such a "black brush" and they expect the readers to accept them at a "white character" in the end. It is like writing a murder mystery and they making the killer a characher that you introduced in the last paragraph.
The only good wimp. . .
. . . is a dead wimp!
Wonderful Story
This is a great story. I'd love to see another chapter and find out what happened to them. Don't take the criticism too seriously from the crowd that always thinks you should never forgive a woman. I thought your story was very realistic. Thanks. --Jim
Not bad
I got really tired with the ex-husband's whining and constant doubts. After he read the journals he should have realized that Paige still loved him and always did. He was a wimp in that he was so unforgiving of what she had done and so whiny about his cancer. Not much of a person in my book. Most cancer patients and war-damaged vets get over that self-pity and live life to the fullest because they realize they have no choice but to live fully each day they have left with their condition. Screw all you wimps out there that have never done anything wrong or cheated on your spouse. Over half of you are out and out hypocritical liars as regards the cheating! Most of you could not get and do not have wives as beautiful and loving as Paige was described! Get a real life and quit condemning these authors who are all braver and more talented then you sickos! Ron Wood Roswell, NM
Good!!!!
Story for Readers Digest!!!.
With a friend/wife like this, who needs enemies?
Loses his job, dying of cancer and wife makes his day by fucking another guy, long term. And some commentators don't like the husband character for being too whiney and then unforgiving of the wife?? WTF?? What does she really have to do, to qualify as a REALLY BAD WIFE? KILL HIM WITH A CHAIN SAW AND THEN EAT HIM? I mean he lost his job and got cancer and she betrays him too?? Who cares what screwed up thoughts might have been going through her twisted mind that she came up with in therapy or put to paper in her journal. They couldn't justify her actions in any respect. Yes, the husband should be understanding. Understand that when he loses both his livelihood and probably his life via long slow death, he can count on his wife's betrayal and then unending drama too. When you got nothing, you got nothing to lose. If this Drama Queen don't qualify for torch the bitch who would? The idea of the husband being nice to his ex-piece-of-crap in the least here is ridiculous. What we'd all like to see for a last chapter is Paige waiting on Drew hand and foot, night and day, performing all sorts of miserable tasks, and even paying for his terminal medical care for the last year of his of his life and when Drew's dying and on his death bed, while Paige waits for her anticipated $1 Million, Drew whispers in her ear, "Punked, I stopped paying on the policy years ago when I saw you with Alan."
That's it?
Good story but it needs to be finished. Too many possible endings.
horrible
horrible story one minute he's dead the next they don't know. I think your trying to please to many readers and in the end your story and you are just stupid.
I agree with Ron Wood on the story; not bad
Too many readers do not understand that they are reading a structured, at least mostly, story of characters and events. This must be the reason for the rants and hate messages on LW tales. I'm constantly amazed at the hate shown to women in these stories. As R Wood said, way too many of these stories feature a weak, indecisive male with little or no humanity in his character. The male is too often cast as a clueless nerd, coupled with an NFL cheerleader-quality wife. Time to get real about life, unless the aim is a totally unlimited fantasy.
Enjoyable reading
Certainly there are several places to point out errors, but overall that story made me think about that situation. That says a lot for the story.Thanks for sharing. anon jerry
Very well written and enjoyable.
Glad to see you back writing, as long as you don`t write any more stories like the ones from 2001, slut wife and wimp husband. Your recent stories are destined to be classics. This story doesn`t seem finished - more to come I hope.
THANK GOD NO CHILDREN
Wimps should not be allowed to breed.
And then?
Enjoyed the read. Good story with well developed characters. What the hell did he do about Annie?
fool me once...
that says it, pretty much.
Lack of character development.
Too little lead in and transition between events. Choppy and rough to read. Male character too full of self pity for an insensitive drudge.
amazing!!!!
I hope you continue this story. It's simply amazing.
Enjoyed the Story!
Retribution, Redemption and Reconciliation aren't always bad together when they appear in the same story. I hope all three of the main characters find happiness along the way. It was a good story with sympathetic characters!
A very good story.
This was a pleasant surprise, and a wonderful read, a well done piece of work. R.T.
good story but why does the husband have to die
he survives and gets rid of paige and marries ann. live happily ever after
I once asked the author (not as 'curiousss') if he was going to finish this story...
...and he said to give him time. He'd had such bad reviews that he'd given up.
Well, after 30 months I guess I'll take this off my stories to be checked occasionally for updates.
It's a shame really. I noted Harry's comments and his comments were right really, but only for him and maybe most of you.
However, I had a slightly different take on it. Paige did a horrible thing in betraying Drew like she did, but the author paints her as being real, remorseful, penitent, certainly guilty but, above all, she loves him. She never really realized exactly how much until he wasn't there with her.
I loved the line from Annie "It's how they redeem themselves that matters in the end."
That's the way I feel and I think this author is very perceptive and empathetic.
It's sad that he hasn't posted anything else since this chapter, possibly from bad reviews and/or lack of encouragement.
Well, I enjoyed the story and I wish you'd write more, including finishing this, one of the best LW stories I've read.
If not, best wishes anyway and thank you for the stories I've enjoyed.
ANNIE HAD A JOB
AND CANT STAY NO MORE AND NOW TURN THE PAGE. TK U MLJ LV NV
Another??
Unfinished one.
cocksmokers like ped0
are the reason LW is full of banal cuck stories. Cuckolds of all stripes work hard to drive talented authors out of the category so their brand of drivel can reign supreme. This author specifically pointed to feedback for no longer submitting; great news for wannabe cucks everywhere. Don't fool yourselves cuckys; you creampie slurping misanthropes with your incessant denials might salve your own tortured psyches but the rest of us recognize your true agenda: driving out good writers to make room for the type of story you love to read, spank off to, then flame. If I had the chance I'd fuck your holes but will just have to settle for telling you to fuck yourselves. Assholes.
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