way to unrealistic and rushed this sounds like a story outline or recap not a postable story. each set of sisters should be their own chapter and that chapter should be three times longer so instead of 1 cheap page it should be two three page chapters. then and only then it might be worth reading.
Interesting how other people want me to remember my memories. The concept of anyone in their life doing 2 sets of sisters in their life should be enough.
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way to unrealistic and rushed this sounds like a story outline or recap not a postable story. each set of sisters should be their own chapter and that chapter should be three times longer so instead of 1 cheap page it should be two three page chapters. then and only then it might be worth reading.
Way to cheapen my memories
Interesting how other people want me to remember my memories. The concept of anyone in their life doing 2 sets of sisters in their life should be enough.
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