Yikes you were right you have fallen low. Can you get any lower? of course you can.
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Anonymous03/19/09
sorry can't get anything
erotic out of this story. I read from 1-4 all chapters in a row and those who started with chapter 1 , all of them did not even read chapter 3. there is no comment since 2 years. I just hope you only invented all that, otherwise I guess you would never have written or being able to write part 4. Or maybe you weren't able for 2 years ? well anyway it's not turning on. sorry
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Anonymous03/20/09
A wager gone wrong
Well, don't be discouraged by the lack of responses, most of these readers obviously don't mind reading the same thing over an over. I personally think that this an excellent piece of erotic writing, and you are doing some fine work. I like where you have taken this story and I can't wait to see how you end it. ... anxiously awaiting the next sequence!
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Anonymous06/25/09
Sorry Assed
Whore, just another piece of trash on the heap, look like 10 miles of bad road when she is 40. No husband, family or life. Ya thats a hot stoty, yuck.
Marriage? Friendship? Civility? It all means shit in this lowlife story! Nothing sexy here,just repulsive!
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Anonymous02/13/17
Cliché filled
Cliché filled garbage starting with a nigger loving white wife, nigger with a smart mouth and huge cock ending with the idiot white husband!!! Could this poor excuse for a writer be any more lame???? Pure garbage and should have warned us of interracial beginning of first chapter not fourth!!!!!
English
Nope
Yikes you were right you have fallen low. Can you get any lower? of course you can.
sorry can't get anything
erotic out of this story. I read from 1-4 all chapters in a row and those who started with chapter 1 , all of them did not even read chapter 3. there is no comment since 2 years. I just hope you only invented all that, otherwise I guess you would never have written or being able to write part 4. Or maybe you weren't able for 2 years ? well anyway it's not turning on. sorry
A wager gone wrong
Well, don't be discouraged by the lack of responses, most of these readers obviously don't mind reading the same thing over an over. I personally think that this an excellent piece of erotic writing, and you are doing some fine work. I like where you have taken this story and I can't wait to see how you end it. ... anxiously awaiting the next sequence!
Sorry Assed
Whore, just another piece of trash on the heap, look like 10 miles of bad road when she is 40. No husband, family or life. Ya thats a hot stoty, yuck.
Glad you stopped writing!
This bullshit really sucks bitch!!! Their is no "totally sucks" catagory but these stories should be there!!!
Absolute Horseshit,From Chapter 1 through 4!!!
Marriage? Friendship? Civility? It all means shit in this lowlife story! Nothing sexy here,just repulsive!
Cliché filled
Cliché filled garbage starting with a nigger loving white wife, nigger with a smart mouth and huge cock ending with the idiot white husband!!! Could this poor excuse for a writer be any more lame???? Pure garbage and should have warned us of interracial beginning of first chapter not fourth!!!!!
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