by RamonaE
You kind of recapped a few things using the very same paragraphs, but the fact that you continued it brings a smile to my face. You have a homerun with this tale and I look forward to more! Please don't let other things distract you.
JR Parz
I am really enjoying this story, I hope you continue. I am looking forward to the women, mostly the agent being used and used.
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!! OR WE'LL BE LIKE THE PEOPLE IN YOUR STORY JUST WAITING FOR MORE!!!
The contrast of her total psychological helplessness and underlying personality is delicious. The well written dialogue is a nice touch as well.
Is there more coming. I really love this story. Very well written and nice sexual tension.
please give us more chapters...
This is a great story. The possibilites are endless. What happens when 2 men are together? What will happen the next time the father daughter are together? So many options and such sexual tension. Love it.
As I wrote in the comments for Chapter 6 of your story, Chapter 7 repeats from Chapter 6.
When can we hear about the fun times that Mr. Lawson's wife had to go through with these men? I'm so excited.
Wow. I definitely need more of this story. I know it's been on hiatus for a while, but it's definitely worth continuing IMHO. So many questions and possible story lines that can be mined here. Please, please write more.