All Comments on 'At Mistress Pandoras Mercy'

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Thor_in_CaliforniaThor_in_Californiaabout 15 years ago
Too short.

Should have been labeled as "Ch. 01." If there is to be no more, then it is really too short as it only sets up a scene and does not finish. If more is on the way, then the author should have so-indicated. What we have is fairly well-written but let's have the rest please.

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