I am extremely pleased with the way you chose to tell this story from the male point of view. Very well written and very vivid. I loved seeing the way he had to contain himself for the whole semester before the seduction. Added a nice touch of realism to the piece. Well done. :)
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Excellent as Usual
I am extremely pleased with the way you chose to tell this story from the male point of view. Very well written and very vivid. I loved seeing the way he had to contain himself for the whole semester before the seduction. Added a nice touch of realism to the piece. Well done. :)
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what a hot little story there!
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For a short story, you put it together quite well. Good work. Keep it going.
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