All Comments on 'John & Argie'

by Paris Waterman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great storyline

Great beginning to what I hope becomes a long story! Make the submissions a little longer.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
A good start

I hope he gets back to the shrink soon, and fills her up with cum. Maybe knocking her up. A good story line, with endless ways to go. Thanks for the post.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GREAT FIRST CHAPTER

Why is everyone a critic and why do the critics generally leave their garbage anonymously? I thought your story was great! This site caters mostly to non-professional writers, so why would anyone expect every story to be professionally written and edited. I say to all the critics if you are not doing better (writing your own professionally turned out stories) then don't complain or don't read.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 6 years ago
Cheaters deserve consequences

Spare us the satyr lipstick on this sociopathic pig

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Senseless, nasty garbage.

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