by Paris Waterman
Great beginning to what I hope becomes a long story! Make the submissions a little longer.
I hope he gets back to the shrink soon, and fills her up with cum. Maybe knocking her up. A good story line, with endless ways to go. Thanks for the post.....Rich
Why is everyone a critic and why do the critics generally leave their garbage anonymously? I thought your story was great! This site caters mostly to non-professional writers, so why would anyone expect every story to be professionally written and edited. I say to all the critics if you are not doing better (writing your own professionally turned out stories) then don't complain or don't read.
Spare us the satyr lipstick on this sociopathic pig