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I get confused about who writes all the triolets
Someone has written a bunch of good ones. I'll assume it's you.
Very pretty and well-formed triolet,
and, hence, a very pleasant read. Well done.
triolet schmiolet.
what I see and hear is a poet whose often beautiful voice is self-choked by leashes, a caged hummingbird. – “they are sore grieving”?!? – who talks like that? who can believe a phrase like that, jammed in only to fit so predetermined requirement. where is the honesty? to this reader, this poem is waste of time, a whole lot of nothing, from a poet whose voice is more beautiful then she knows when she’s free and flying, a poet who believes she writes fluff and then what does she do? she goes and applies further restraints and cuffs and chords to herself instead of bolting when the cage door flies open and hitting the sky, where birds belong. is that the solution to your perceived fluff problem? you don’t write fluff at your best, by the way, though it is impossible to know that reading this nonsense. and “Obdurate Oasis?” forget about it. that writing’s about as phony as it gets. I do understand these are for the Survivor deal going on, which seems like a whole lot of fun and which is certainly a good reason to try them all out if you enjoy it. I just worry that a voice as beautiful as yours (and one that still seemingly does not believe in itself) will somehow be hindered further still by writing counterfeit slop like this, which I really hate to believe. so, now I have said what I wanted to say to you. you won’t hear any more about it from me, beautiful bird.
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