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Great Story
No losers in the story. You treated all the participants with respect.
As for the negative comments. There are people out there that think that all human sexuality is dirty. Not surprising there are a few of these people on this site.
Sooo Hot!
I can't believe how hot this story was.
I would love to live such a story in real life. I have been working on my knockout, good-looking woman for a while to get her primed. I keep telling her how I want to watch her fucking and sucking-off other guys. I have noticed that she is beginning to respond sexually to these hot stories. Maybe, just maybe it will happen soon.
I am going to have her read this story. I bet she will be ready then.
Great story
This one of the best erotic stories I have read. Masterpiece
great writing and story
great writing and story I got so excited you are one of the best writers here
Mindless and perverted brain shit.
The very worst on this site.
Perfect vacation
What man wouldn,t want his wife to enjoy two younger guys ?
Supremely Hot!
A supremely hot, well written and well thought wife sharing tale. I thoroughly enjoyed reading such a hot story. Keep up the good work!
longcast
This was a truely wild time for you .the story told as a true event witch brought more. intensity to it. thank you
re: Houston we have a problem
Yeah, the problem is you stupid idiot. Who elected you spokesman for the cucks? What is it with you asses that think only your opinion counts. Well you can stick your opinion up where the sun don't shine.
I'd love to fuck your wife in the ass
This was very Hot reading material. It started to make me think of doing this with my wife...then you brought me back to reality. Very Hot Story.
very, very well written
Captures the reality of how these things actually go down.. they often start of reluctantly, wondering if its actually going to happen.
nice story - sharedhousewife stole your story
See http://www.literotica.com/s/donna-lets-loose-in-sa n-diego?page=5
enjoyed it
very well writen absolutely wounderful
cool - got to try with my wife
cool - i am going to try this with my wife!!
interesting story but...
I like this story. It's highly erotic but you've got to ensure you don't create confusion by misplacing your characters. See page 2&4, Stan was not always the guy with the unusualy thick & long cock. Take note for your other stories to avoid such mistakes.
pregnant how to tell scott
only part of the story that could be better is where they cum inside her should have been scott didnt know i went off my birth control and am at my most fertile time now after all the potent young sperm entering my uterus i am pregnant with twins
At 5 pages, was longer than it needed to be. Spring Break was a great premise for cougar action.
Loved It!
One of the best I've read! Wicked hot! Believable. Not too 'over-the-top,' but also not do gorily graphic. Just enough. Wouldn't mind revisiting Scott and Gina on their next vacation!
my wife fuck 8 guys 2girls
my wife and i go to a swingers clubs every weekend and goes to the open room and gets fucks by 8 guys and 2 girls she takes 2 cocks in her mouth and cock up her cunt and arse if you want to fuck her put your email address on this page she is the best fuck ever
Great
What a great read, well thought out (couple of out of place thing) but well paced, thought it was a good read.
I luv Gina!
Oh my God! Its not everyday u get to read something as captivating as this here... Amazing! Gina's one hell of a wife! Truly in luv wit Scot. And so mature! I wish I find such too. Wouldn't mind checking them up on their next vacation... Keep it up!
I have never been so excited. I wish to hell I was a girl so I could enjoy all the fun in all my holes.
Great!
Good story...very erotic. Love the imagery of her legs being pulled apart for Stan to enter her!!
To the guy who takes his wife to a swingers party - stevie_baines@yahoo.com
is it real
yes i think so. i have the same fantasy and we cae ery close to do it.
the writting is extremely good and matches fantasy of probably most of us
Well done!!
Cuckolding is not a particular fetish of mine, and fiction I've read on the subject usually leaves me cold through being only understandable to people who share the fetish to the extreme, or being poorly written.
You, newbie2008, have written something that captivated me and that I enjoyed from start to finish. That was so erotic and so human - so real!
Well thought out, beautifully expressed. Real erotica, not just one-handed typing ;)
I hope to read many more of your stories. :)
Loved it
One my favorite stories so far!!!! Would love to find a man that would love watching me fuck others.
Great job!
newbie2008 - Well written and one of my favorites. You have a gift as a writer. Keep it going..
And bowling_gal... we are out there ;)
A theory on the haters
Many of the Loving Wives stories feature punishment or catastrophe of some sort coming to the wife because of her cheating. I figure the guys trashing your stories are angry that the husbands and wives in them are not devastated in some way, the cheating wife suffering a worse fate than the broken-hearted husband. The haters are lured to the Loving Wife story because they crave to feel the wife (their ex-wife?) suffer some horrible fate. Since that doesn't happen in newbie's stories, they hate those stories and are compelled to tell us the stories are crap.
The stories are great. They actually make the readers who like the scenarios believe they are possible. I haven't had the experience, but some report they have and vouch for the verisimilitude.
Wow, sounds like one of our adventures
Great tale, sounds like one of our vacation adventures
really enjoyed it
the emotions, your description of her-very well written- and the way you wrapped it up at the end
and couldn't believe the wanker nyminus' post
Well written
You have a way with words. I basically read these stories for enjoyment, but also
I like picking out errors in grammar, or spelling (just my thing). I found very few with your story. With some, I can't believe how the "English language" gets butchered.
It was hot, and exciting. We have never experienced anything like it, but as most horny men, have fantasized about it, and watching my wife with another man...
A pile of garbage !
Written by a mercenary faggot.!! "1" .
Well done!
I liked it very much. Definitely a cut above the norm. Well written, very hot, and a dash of reality-check at the end.
What kind of a perverted sicko shares his wife with other men?
I'll tell you, a fucking dirty spinless coward, thats what. The worst story I have ever read on this site. The rest of you who like that sort of thing need your sick head read. I wish I could give stories like this a minus score. Sick, just plain sick. That's all folks.
RVWS
Love your review nyminus
Hit the nail straight on the head.
Awesome
Fucking awesome story! I couldn't take my hand off my cock the entire time. One of my all-time favorites. I will be cumming to this story over and over again. More please!
Strong Drinks
The less mix in a drink... the more alcohol content... the longer it takes for someone to get drunk. Get the right mix and the alcohol enters the system a lot faster than with a 60% plus alcohol content.
outstanding
I like the way you give personality, humour, emotions, to the ladies in your stories ; they are nut just masturbation fantasy objects -
A bit heavy on the auro-biography sometimes -
Win all situation
I liked the way you pulled the story to an end, realistic, and a win all situation. Agreed, this is a fantasy, but it sounded good to be true and it is very difficult for a realistic fantasy to end on a win-all note. Cheers to the author.
As for the naysayers - I think it is only one or two of them posting again and again every now and then.
"1"
Pure fucking trash. Only the cucks could like a story like this.
Just enjoy reading the comments
I have to chuckle at all the whiners who moan and groan about other readers who have a different take on this story. As if they wrote this story and were being attacked personally for the content. Damn people, grow up and stop your pitiful crying, like its going to change anything. This happens on every story. One guy even suggested that the same person writes all the negative comments. Man you're delusional.
No comment on the story, didn't read it, since the comments pretty much told me what to expect. But when I want a good laugh, I read the comments, especially on controversial stories, like this one. You poor chumps with demented minds. You should all turn your wives into sluts. What a turn on, eh?
Excellent Story
Thanks for a great read. Enjoyed the realness of the story.
Hot and arousing and complex.
Not much more I can say that would be unique to what many have already said. Well done. Arousing. This was three nights of enjoyment for me also. Not often a story here explores the complexities of an event like that. Hope to see more. Will be delving into your other submissions. Thank you.
1*
Clucks win husband loses.....
rubbish
i agree with the nameless twat at the bottom of the comments.? however my words are polite.? its rubbish.? have a nice day.?
great
The wife and I thought it was a great read that kept us in there until the end.
Convincing My Wife
This story was clearly good enough to convince my wife to want the same action depicted in this story. She is somewhat hesitant but wants to find some guys for a similar scenario. Dreams do come true.
GREAT Fuck !
Well, my wife and I had our first 3some while dating and after married 6 months, I shared her with my life long best friend who was hung and we all loved it. Over 18 years I shared her with A LOT of different guys and the secret was that with only a few exceptions there were no repeat fuck sessions and thereby avoiding the potential emotional hang ups. She LOVED being shared and getting all the different cocks and LOVED me taking part or watching and I LOVED watching her being a total SLUT for the guys. Anyway, GREAT story..... Steve.
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hot!!!!!!
cant wait to read to the wife hot!!!! one of my favorites ever
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