Alpha Protection Ch. 01

Interesting

I love how you are introducing the story and I look forward to Maddox's reaction when he learns of Tempest's name.

soo kool

wow luvin it cant wait for the next chapter x

Change to another editor

Story line was ok but as for the editing part...well, it leaves much to be desired.

wow

Great start can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting start

An interesting start and so like a canine, not interested in listening when his primal needs are aroused... lol.... Really looking forward to where this goes.

Interested for more.

It was a great start. I am interested to see where it goes, but you need a new editor.

excellent

please add more.

Great Start!

Finally, a really decent werewolf story! This was great I can't wait to read chapter two, although you need some spell check or a new editor!

Same mind

Seems a lot of us are of the same mind. It's a good start, but your editor needs to step up as there were several spelling errors. Looking forward to the next chapter.

loved it and can't wait for the next chapter

Please continue to wrote I am anxiously awaiting this story..

LOVE IT!!!

Great start! Please write more soon>

Awesome!

This story starting out real good. looking forward to the next chapter.

Very nicely done...

I hope you continue. This is good.

Good start

I hope you continue the story but you need a new editor. There were too many mistakes from grammar to sentence construction.

Loved it!!

I'm in love, I'm in love and I don't care who knows it!!(from the movie Elf) This was an excellent beginning. Bravo! Keep up the great work.

Enticing beginning!

Made me want to read more. Excellent character development; I love how you make the wolf a separate "being" within the man. It's like the dichotomy that exists within us all. Half human. Half... Other.

I am wondering...

I am wondering if you got your inspiration for this story from "The Lords of the Underworld: series by Gena Showalter...amazing series...very hot...same type of writing style it seems...even though I haven't read the whole chapter yet...sounds really good though...:)

I like it, but it needs to be edited....please

Spelling

It's very good but I agree with Anonymous, it does need to be edited. Watch out for spelling. Keep writing though, I really like Maddox's character, especially his protectiveness.

thanks

I enjoyed the idea of Maddox (or any man) can show so much compassion. Love is possible here, and I am looking forward too reading more of this story.

Loved this

Really like the start of this. It is looking more attractive and can't wait to get into it. The story length looks about right for me. I want to know the man....sounds delicious, sensitive, aware.

Bringing

It full force with the intro' editing and grammatical errors detract a little.

Loving this start. I'm sure its going to be very interesting to watch Maddox fight with his wolf! LOL

Poor wolf I know he was dying being denied