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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
I like this.....

(you knew there was a "but" coming, right?) <B>BUT</B> I wanted it to be smoother, less abrupt stops. Perhaps if you broke your lines less or differently it would be more moody, less of a list. Thanks for this though.<P>

Tess

vrosej10vrosej10about 15 years ago
A perfect summation of jazz

I love this poem. I am a fan of certain kinds of jazz and this poem made me recall instantly my favourite songs. Love your work.

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.