by WFEATHER
What an incredible story. So emotional and truly beautiful. Will you be adding more to this? I think this story is just way to damn good to just leave at this one chapter. Please add a bit more to it!
Thank you for letting us share the story. I like most everything you write and this was no exception.
Stories like this make you wonder about values. Is it more important to be where you have the best financial and business situation or are the people values more important? We are forced to conclude that this loving couple chose the first, business values over the love. Maybe they are fortunate enough to still have the option to reconsider. The fact that the last sentence of the story describes her as "girlfriend" while all during the story she was called "ex-girlfriend" tells us that perhaps they do have the option and are willing to reconsider. Perhaps "you can always get another good job" is more meaningful than: "there are lots of fish in the sea". 4*
BUT the ending was a bit disappointing. It felt like everything and then nothing was changed. Sometimes the story needs told and sometimes it's OK to leave it up to the readers imagination. This one needed to be told...even an epilog would do quite well.
I gave you 5 stars and favorites this story ... So engaging and the end oh so sweet ... I hope I find more about these two! Thank you Sir :)