I just love him, his so sweet. A litle short but otherwise good adition. But pleas dont make up wait as long for the next chapter.
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Anonymous03/25/09
umm
Ok why all this hoopla with parliment about not killing, not upsetting the balance and yada ya but they will keep those alive who are actively trying to kill off the royal family and so forth. All Lyrik has to do is meet up with one of them if she's to be banished. She's clearly treacherous and has no problem with murder so why keep people like this alive or within the general public? It doesn't make sense. Explain this some more please.
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Anonymous03/27/09
MORE
Deidre and Tolem are just so sweet. So nice to see a storyon here that has not only a plot but a pretty good subplot as well. Please don't make us wait so long before the next update.
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Anonymous06/30/09
THE END?????
Ok, so I normally don't leave comments, but I love this story! It's been a while since you've posted an installment and I really really want to know how the story ends.
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Anonymous07/11/09
awwwwwwwww
please don't let this be the last chapter to this story, all the characters are great, storyline has kept me wanting, for someone who doesn't read sci fi. so pls keep up the writing.
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aaawwwww
I just love him, his so sweet. A litle short but otherwise good adition. But pleas dont make up wait as long for the next chapter.
umm
Ok why all this hoopla with parliment about not killing, not upsetting the balance and yada ya but they will keep those alive who are actively trying to kill off the royal family and so forth. All Lyrik has to do is meet up with one of them if she's to be banished. She's clearly treacherous and has no problem with murder so why keep people like this alive or within the general public? It doesn't make sense. Explain this some more please.
MORE
Deidre and Tolem are just so sweet. So nice to see a storyon here that has not only a plot but a pretty good subplot as well. Please don't make us wait so long before the next update.
THE END?????
Ok, so I normally don't leave comments, but I love this story! It's been a while since you've posted an installment and I really really want to know how the story ends.
awwwwwwwww
please don't let this be the last chapter to this story, all the characters are great, storyline has kept me wanting, for someone who doesn't read sci fi. so pls keep up the writing.
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