All Comments on 'My Kyle'
by DreamerOne
- 17 Comments
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI loved it. It was so sweet! and the sex was way hot!
I just wish it was longer, not more chapters but more fleshed out (although i would love to read more about Kyle and Dean).
No offense to your writing. i just liked how sweet the story was and wanted more. Greedy :P
Hope to see more of you
Calit69about 15 years agoStoryline a bit overdone. Cant work out how many roomies have wasted time by not declaring their love for each other. Cant say I was that lucky at varsity. Everybody was a striaght arrow lol. You write clearly and decriptively , is English your home language as you have expressed yourself well. Dont believe that the story has legs. There needs to be some form of delicious anticipation in terms of developing the relationship and feelings. A second chapter will be different setting but more of the same They have already got to know each other. If they love each other so much are they likely to engage in a menage a trois. All said well done keep writing
Anonymousabout 15 years agoYou started out slow and then sped up. It would have been nice to have the story longer with more info. But wonderful first story! You need to keep writing.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoMarvelous start. Needs continuing drama. GREAT job.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoA good first effort. It could use another chapter or two. Going to read your other stories now.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoGreat story though I feel it was a start rather than a story in itself. . I really liked it and would love to see more chapters.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoIt was a really good start to a story but it kinda feels like somethings missing. Please write more and finish the story off as good as you started it.
SVBLIXabout 14 years agoIt is a really good story but it needs more to finish it off right. Please write another chapter or make the first one longer and more in depth. Keep up the really good writing and I hope to read more from you soon.
afrodita79almost 14 years agoit´s a greate story one of the best I ever read congrats... hope to read more
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoOnly three letters can describe this story and that's all........O.....M.....G.
Anonymousover 12 years agoFirst attempt or not, your story is wonderful! Engaging, emotional, and beautiful. I just noticed a second chapter, and will be reading it immediately. Again, well done DreamerOne!
dnsontnover 2 years agoAn excellent first story. Discovering this in January 2021, I’m excited there is more to read!
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