Ok !! You've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. What in the world is really going on? What is her Uncle if he's the one mauling and tearing people apart? Too many questions and too few answers!! Great second chapter you darn tease!!
I am intrigued to see where this will lead. Keep up the good work.
this is a good story this rise a lot question i like the way u tell a story.
Already you have us wanting to know more of Roland's past, of Molly's past...and their future too! Looking forward to more!
Ok you got me hooked. I can't wait to read more about Roland and Molly. Don't keep us waiting too long. I find your story very interesting so keep up the good work.
this may be the first story your writing but your doing a damn good job of it.. I love this story so very great beginning I can't wait to see more from you.. believe me i've read alot of books and this is likely to turn out to be very very good.. i can't wait for more just keep posting...
Great work with this story so far. Ican't wait to see the next chapter. Just make sure it has a happy ending. ^^
I hope you will continue this story. I would like to know more about Roland and Molly. I also hope there is a happy ending. Seems like they could both use some happiness.
Please finish the story
please finish the story. i've really enjoyed it so far and am so curious about what will come next.
very good story, that's why I can't wait for the next part. Do continue it!
luv it, continue it, plez
Exellent story, keeps you wanting more. Soon I hope?
are you going to finish or let me sit here and chew on my nails wondering what's going to happen next?? *growls as she hits the quick of her nail* SOON!! Please!?! =^_^=
Yep, just like everyone else I'm left wanting to read more, lol. Please don't stop and leave us all hanging!
I hope that you continue with this story. It is a really good read. Keep up with the good work!!
I hope you continue to write this story.
It is a good one.
Please don't stop writing it.
i agree with the other comments please write more and soon i want to know wat happends next
Your story is absolutely riveting! Your writing style is also easy on the eye.
Both chapters are great and I'm waiting for the next one!!
keep up the great work!!
Please finish the story.
it got longer and is still very good. i look forward to more greatness from you.
Love the series keep up the good work can't wait for CH'3
Finish this please?? Because this is really great and I really hope this will not be another one of those well started but unfinished stories!
Great story, hope you finish it!
Please please please please please finish it a really really good story
I have read this at least five times I like and I want more of the beast story
Hope, in time, you return to writing and finish this.
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