All Comments on 'Wolf Girl Ch. 04'

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Anonymousabout 15 years ago

not bad, so far

So far yu've got a good start, now I would like to see where you go with it.

Anonymousabout 15 years ago

I think this chapter was short...

But I disagree that the story's not going anywhere.

More characters coming in soon (Like in Chapt. 5) would liven it up.

Not sure I liked the violence, but then again, it is a werewolf book... people are going to get eaten, right?

Lots of questions...

Are there more wolves? Is she part of a pack? Are they going to come and get her and try to bring her back? Are there other creatures... VAMPIRES? I want more!

VictorDoUrden almost 14 years ago

So good so far...

Far too rushed this time though.

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