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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Lovely writing talent

Your writing talent is beautifully developed into a lascivious, lush story that's developing here. The only thing I found jarring was the switch of tenses halfway through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
DO THE MATH

1500 words. 208 + 98 +93 word sentence!!!!! 1503/399 26.5% of the story in 3 sentences!.

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Words, and love (and lust) are the primary forces in my life. I haven't posted new stories in quite a while, but I still enjoy knowing what's here has been appreciated, and I enjoy finding new people to chat with.