What guy would be turned off by getting a blowjob from his sister? I did NOT turn it down from my older sister and yes also had me fuck her........sweet pussy......so taboo yet SO SO sweet........
There are those of us, from an older generation, who can fully understand the hero's feelings. If, like me, you had been brought up in the forties and early fifties the feelings expressed would seem very natural. Of course that all changed for those who grew up after the late sixties and mid seventies. This is a good read!
by
Anonymous03/31/09
GOOD NIGHT!
GROSS!
by
Anonymous03/31/09
Good Night! hehe
Gross...no! A bit twisted...yes! Can't please everyone. It is what it is. I admit, could be edited a bit better.
by
Anonymous03/31/09
Funny story
Like any girl has to go to her brother to find a guy who will "help her out."
If she had even one male friend, or a male friend of a friend, her situation would have been easily taken care of.
Unless...... No, there can't possibly be more to this story??? :-)
Keep writing
by
Anonymous04/17/09
Huh?
After "Christain and Emily" this is painfully pale by comparison. It doesn't even read like a
Nora Jean Story. Whats Up Girl? Try again
by
Anonymous05/14/09
Great Story!!!
Differant and entertaining. I wish more stories were like this. Keep up the good writing.
by
Anonymous07/14/09
loved it
i loved it it was not the best but i can easily see the effort and passion of the story and to the readers i dont think it is so much the idea of fucking your sister mom cousin or brother that makes it feel good but the idea that most the word thing it is immoral and you should not be doing it and that you know if you get caught you will be in a shit load of trouble but you don't care because i will admit doing things your not supposed to be doing feels 50 times better then if you are allowed to i got a blowjob from my mother when i was 12 and i must say it was heavenly and 5 years later i got one from my now wife and it can not compare to the sensation i felt when my cock was pressed in her lips
Your ability to tell a story and your imagination are wonderful. It would be a pleasure to know someone with your talent. (telstar2008@yahoo.com)
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Anonymous10/09/10
write more please
wow great story you should keep writing about these two on if they have sex
by
Anonymous12/24/10
Please Continue
Wow! that was really good. Thank you for this, but I want more. I appreciate your way of writing a story in great detail, really excellent. Please write more incest stories and you need to continue this story.
by
Anonymous12/24/10
the guy who had the untitled comment should write this story abut his daughter and him fucking all these eyars, his comment was fucking hot.
I'd love to read how he got his man tool into her young hole.
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Anonymous06/30/11
A different kind of set up for sure
A pity you've abandoned this one. Have to say the dude was just too reluctant to be believed. Who was he meant to be - the freaking POPE?
Gave it 3 stars since it was too short to deserve more and you really need to get help with your vocabulary (manor/manner; vale/veil from another story) - or else just stick to words you're certain about. At least proofread it yourself to catch stuff like "swallow him[his] cum" before you submit.
You have a talented imagination but you need help with the writing skill - even for here.
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Anonymous11/19/11
its funny
it was funny imagining that guy situation. but what if we knew at the end that she is not pregnant?!!!!
To anonymous if you can only be negative then I truly feel sorry for you. I know who you are and I know you actually hate this site and either you have a religious hang up or you just hate life. Leave the writers alone. Everyone now pays zero attention to what you have to say. Your just wasting the space that people who actually have something constructive to say unlike your negativity. You should have more pride in what you say. As for the actual story I quite liked it and would like more ch.
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Anonymous02/09/12
SISTERS/PREGNANCY CUM/SLUT
NOW I KINDDA THINK THIS IS NICE, ALTHOUGH I THINK THE BROTHER COULD HAVE GIVEN HER HIS CUM ALOT SOONER BUT I'VE NEVER KNOW A MEDICAL
PROBLUM LIKE THIS BUT STRANGER THINGS HAVE HAPPENED ALL IN ALL GREAT STORY NICE ENDING A LITTLE SHORT A COUPLE OF MORE CHAPTERS
WOULD BE NICE I GIVE YOU A GOOD 4 STARS FOR THIS,,,,,,,,,,,''R''...........................
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Anonymous01/15/13
cum sucking
he should have fucked her too
by
Anonymous04/08/13
an okay story, but...
it should have been her brother who fucked a baby up her cunt. It's in his sis's cunt that a big brother's sperm belongs.
by
Anonymous08/20/13
Need more chapters
Plz plz plz plz preety plz continue this story until the babys born, its reaaly sweeet. Maybe she could repay him with her milk or something
English
Yeah right
What guy would be turned off by getting a blowjob from his sister? I did NOT turn it down from my older sister and yes also had me fuck her........sweet pussy......so taboo yet SO SO sweet........
Very Good!
There are those of us, from an older generation, who can fully understand the hero's feelings. If, like me, you had been brought up in the forties and early fifties the feelings expressed would seem very natural. Of course that all changed for those who grew up after the late sixties and mid seventies. This is a good read!
GOOD NIGHT!
GROSS!
Good Night! hehe
Gross...no! A bit twisted...yes! Can't please everyone. It is what it is. I admit, could be edited a bit better.
Funny story
Like any girl has to go to her brother to find a guy who will "help her out."
If she had even one male friend, or a male friend of a friend, her situation would have been easily taken care of.
Unless...... No, there can't possibly be more to this story??? :-)
Keep writing
Huh?
After "Christain and Emily" this is painfully pale by comparison. It doesn't even read like a
Nora Jean Story. Whats Up Girl? Try again
Great Story!!!
Differant and entertaining. I wish more stories were like this. Keep up the good writing.
loved it
i loved it it was not the best but i can easily see the effort and passion of the story and to the readers i dont think it is so much the idea of fucking your sister mom cousin or brother that makes it feel good but the idea that most the word thing it is immoral and you should not be doing it and that you know if you get caught you will be in a shit load of trouble but you don't care because i will admit doing things your not supposed to be doing feels 50 times better then if you are allowed to i got a blowjob from my mother when i was 12 and i must say it was heavenly and 5 years later i got one from my now wife and it can not compare to the sensation i felt when my cock was pressed in her lips
more?
I wish you would continue this story.....
wantmore
please add more where he either fucks her or gets his friends to feed her too
Very Erotic
Your ability to tell a story and your imagination are wonderful. It would be a pleasure to know someone with your talent. (telstar2008@yahoo.com)
write more please
wow great story you should keep writing about these two on if they have sex
Please Continue
Wow! that was really good. Thank you for this, but I want more. I appreciate your way of writing a story in great detail, really excellent. Please write more incest stories and you need to continue this story.
the guy who had the untitled comment should write this story abut his daughter and him fucking all these eyars, his comment was fucking hot.
I'd love to read how he got his man tool into her young hole.
A different kind of set up for sure
A pity you've abandoned this one. Have to say the dude was just too reluctant to be believed. Who was he meant to be - the freaking POPE?
Gave it 3 stars since it was too short to deserve more and you really need to get help with your vocabulary (manor/manner; vale/veil from another story) - or else just stick to words you're certain about. At least proofread it yourself to catch stuff like "swallow him[his] cum" before you submit.
You have a talented imagination but you need help with the writing skill - even for here.
its funny
it was funny imagining that guy situation. but what if we knew at the end that she is not pregnant?!!!!
Ask your self
To anonymous if you can only be negative then I truly feel sorry for you. I know who you are and I know you actually hate this site and either you have a religious hang up or you just hate life. Leave the writers alone. Everyone now pays zero attention to what you have to say. Your just wasting the space that people who actually have something constructive to say unlike your negativity. You should have more pride in what you say. As for the actual story I quite liked it and would like more ch.
SISTERS/PREGNANCY CUM/SLUT
NOW I KINDDA THINK THIS IS NICE, ALTHOUGH I THINK THE BROTHER COULD HAVE GIVEN HER HIS CUM ALOT SOONER BUT I'VE NEVER KNOW A MEDICAL
PROBLUM LIKE THIS BUT STRANGER THINGS HAVE HAPPENED ALL IN ALL GREAT STORY NICE ENDING A LITTLE SHORT A COUPLE OF MORE CHAPTERS
WOULD BE NICE I GIVE YOU A GOOD 4 STARS FOR THIS,,,,,,,,,,,''R''...........................
cum sucking
he should have fucked her too
an okay story, but...
it should have been her brother who fucked a baby up her cunt. It's in his sis's cunt that a big brother's sperm belongs.
Need more chapters
Plz plz plz plz preety plz continue this story until the babys born, its reaaly sweeet. Maybe she could repay him with her milk or something
unlikely...
but ohhh so hot...lol
Sweet and verrrrry sexy
A good brother helping his sister albeit reluctantly. My my my. Good read
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