All Comments on 'Baby Gets Eaten for Lunch'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
It sounds like they haven't been married long

A good story with very hot sex. I thought of them as newlyweds or very passionate lovers. Thanks for the story....Rich

Agoodman954Agoodman954about 15 years ago
Great Start

This was a great start for a first story. I wish it had been twice as long, but that's just me being greedy. Keep up the good work and don't listen to the ney sayers.

KOTKKOTKabout 15 years ago
A great start.

I liked the story. Keep up the good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great

Yep, short, but well worth the time. The title drew me in and the writing kept me reading. Do some more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Love it when married people lust after each other! Great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hope you unlocked the door before you left lol been their done that too

Flh3241Flh32419 months ago

Well done well written and we need more

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