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by bflagsst03/29/09

Infinite and expanding/expanding into infinity

is nonsensical and has been incredibly cliche for the last fifty odd years. It's like you wrote this in one breath then submitted it, and that bums me out because most people who submit stuff here work hard on every word and line.

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