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A Phetchaburi Island of the Mind

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by bflagsst03/29/09

I think I understand the intention of the poem.

I just don't think you execute. Too much meandering, which wouldn't be a problem but the little stories aren't very rich in orginality, detail, poetic turn of phrase.

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