Not a bad little story. It was quick, to the point, and ended pretty well. I'm not sure about "poorly written and edited" as I thought it was pretty well-written. There should just be a little more. Keep writing, you're doing fine.
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Not a bad little story. It was quick, to the point, and ended pretty well. I'm not sure about "poorly written and edited" as I thought it was pretty well-written. There should just be a little more. Keep writing, you're doing fine.
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