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Aiko and the Aliens

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/19/09

Arousing but Short

A very arousing story, but feels awfully short. Seems like it could be developed more.

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by barepusslover06/15/09

Great Start!!

Love the story line! Are there additional chapters planned for this one? :-)

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by Anonymous07/29/15

dry as dust

this reads like an outline for a story rather than the story itself.

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