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ugh
if I had a hammer I would smash your fingers again and again to stop your writing..or spill bleach in your eyes..never ever write here again
Find another place to publish please
Most story writers and publishers avoid stories of RAPE. I despisse your story and the sick mind behind it. I did NOT read the whole story as I could not stomach it. I think you need to see a psychiatrist.
great story.
good sklll writting. keep more stories cumming.
I really enjoyed the well done work
I hope that you continue this style of posting. It reads like a chronicle or diary and is refreshing new look into the erotic mind of a very good author. I would say that the story is straight forward from the start, and the characters were well developed. A believable story and one of plenty of hot erotic sex. No one was judging the other, although she did feel a little slutty about the first gang-bang. It's nice to read that the husband can watch and not be jealous, and also have sexual release of his own. It seems to have put life back into their sex lives. Thanks for the very good story.........Rich
Only those couples who have open marriages.
Or are swingers will like this story. Why is it that every story like this has a couple not talking to each other about how to improve their sex life? What do they do instead? they fuck somebody else. Good thinking! Or they become swingers like this couple. Actually I am glad that the couple can now embark on a life fullfilled with sex with anyone and everyone they want without worrying about what the their partner thinks. Besides they deserve each other. I hope the requestee enjoyed their story. I would question if they have a marriage after this but hey I don't care for either person in this story. They can fuck who thye like as far as I am concerned. But as always stupid people do stupid things.
I liked it!!!
I like the fact that you are honoring reader requests. I'm sure that many of the requests are fantasties but I don't understand why some readers can't accept that. Read the stories for what they are, fiction and fantasy. Some of the comments suggest that the readers personlize the story which is why they write negative comments. That suggests to me that they are the ones who have trouble with their sex lives or marriage. Keep honoring requests and ignore the idiot comments.
Shit Sherlock
Jeez read some of the comments. I think I must be a bad and sick puppy as I really think you write exceptionally well. A raunchy and sexually stimulating read. There was an element of repetitiveness with the multiple bangs but for the person who fantasises about multiple fucks you did very well. As an older person the fanatsies are about as good as it gets. Keep writing and avoid any hammers
A Sick Stroke Is Just That - watching big cocks
One or more wonders why wallie feels the need to watch big cocks in his ho? Why does that excite his one handed keyboard when nothing else does anymore?
He - anymore the wimp cuckster only gets excited enough by self imposed male humiliation to get it up and off.
Wonder what he will do a year or two from now when that self cuck watching cocks addiction doesn't work? Pain? Kiddie porn? Sex Offenders List?
Sparkling future that path.
BRAVO# 55
Bravo to the author for trying to meet the requests of his readers.Too many authors on this sight pretend to be above the need to please their readers.Wheras, the wise writer attempts to please his audience.That this author can succeed " on request" gives ample proof of his technical ability.At the same time this should give all the readers pause when we contemplate the overall excellence of the authors who contribute to this sight.Ritterburg# 55
This comment is for the nasty comment leavers
Another great story!
For the nasty comment leavers - what part of fantasy do you not understand? You stupid bastards this is just writing, someone having fun and providing fun for the rest of us. If you do not like it - stop reading. Simple. Writing the stuff that you two idiots at the bottom of this list have proves that you are so retarded as to be at the bottom of intelligent human life. Especially the sadist who calls himself anonymous from UK.
This comment is for the nasty comment leavers
Another great story!
For the nasty comment leavers - what part of fantasy do you not understand? You stupid bastards this is just writing, someone having fun and providing fun for the rest of us. If you do not like it - stop reading. Simple. Writing the stuff that you two idiots at the bottom of this list have proves that you are so retarded as to be at the bottom of intelligent human life. Especially the sadist who calls himself anonymous from UK.
Don't read it if you don't like it!
I agree with the previous comment. If you don't like Walterio's style of writing, don't read it and don't sabatoge the story. I for one like his style and I think it is unfair that his stories are sabatoged by a few idiots.
Too much of a good thing
It may be just because I'm a Certified Massage Therapist who enjoys giving erotic massages to my clients (now that I'm retired, they're free), but I enjoyed only the first part of the story. The description of the increasingly sensual massage strokes was stimulating, with accurate depictions of the receiver's fearful anticipation and then eager acceptance of the erotic massage.
But the increasingly unbelievable fantasy of one after another after another "masseuse" (meaning masseur) penetrating her--even to the point of raping her when she was screaming to have them stop--was a definite turn-off for this reader. I'm sure other readers enjoy such brutal episodes, but I have to be honest in my appraisals of this story, so it earns the lowest score from me. Sorry 'bout that, Walterio.
Hell of a story, very entertaining.
I also enjoyed the last one you wrote about the 18 year old and his mother. Mother/son is my very favorite incest story followed by brother/sister and mother/ daughter. In case you missed it I really like to read incest stories although I never engaged in it (except cousins, I don't count cousins, LOL). Keep up the good work.
stone cold
A occasional dalliance works out to spice up a couples sex life but this is beyond the pale. No two people can stay together when they have deceived each other as much as this. Stupid!
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