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WickedEveWickedEveabout 15 years ago
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For starters, cut out a few words:<br>

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<b>If I could, I would draw you<br>

those curves<br>

Instead, I settle on touch<br>

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maybe it wouldn’t be bad<br>

being blind <br>

knowing you by feel<br>

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stumbling across you<br>

fingers sliding<br></b>

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Then eliminate an "ing" word or two.

WriterDomWriterDomabout 15 years agoAuthor
I'd rather be golfing

Thank you Eve. I'm a little out of practice. If I start doing one a day maybe my muse will return.

Check out my blog if you want a wet pussy. It's in my profile.

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