I hope that you will write about their next meeting. Use a little more description of the surroundings to add length to the story and to add to the word-picture you are creating.
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Anonymous04/11/09
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I could see the lust and passion. It was written like an old friend telling a dirty secret.
English
Too rushed.
Enjoyed it. The brevity enforced the speed of the
Lust
Good story
I hope that you will write about their next meeting. Use a little more description of the surroundings to add length to the story and to add to the word-picture you are creating.
raw
I could see the lust and passion. It was written like an old friend telling a dirty secret.
great
that was very hot i loved it
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