A prose poem that enthralled and repulsed me in equal measure with the violence and raw sensuality of the scenes. Your language is nearly flawless, while the story is almost frightening.
The name attracted me to it but it seems less Hesse and more Paul Bowles? Maybe that's just the association with Tangiers.
I am sorry if my comment about Hesse led you to think it was in his style. It was just an acknowledgement of my using his "Mad Anarchist Theatre" idea ("All girls are yours") from Der Steppenwolf.
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Nothing Hesse about it!
Rip me a new one...
A prose poem that enthralled and repulsed me in equal measure with the violence and raw sensuality of the scenes. Your language is nearly flawless, while the story is almost frightening.
The name attracted me to it but it seems less Hesse and more Paul Bowles? Maybe that's just the association with Tangiers.
About Hesse...
I am sorry if my comment about Hesse led you to think it was in his style. It was just an acknowledgement of my using his "Mad Anarchist Theatre" idea ("All girls are yours") from Der Steppenwolf.
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