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a little short, but a good introduction to a story
She doesn't realize that she is playing with fire. You don't tease a man like Gerry, and not get fucked, one way or the other. I hope that Gerry has a huge cock that is going to annihilate L.A.'s pussy, stretch her pussy out like she has given birth to a 15 pound baby. So much, that there isn't any hiding the fact from her husband. Good start, thanks.......Rich
Pathetic wimp cuckster
Swingers are us again. Pathetic people do pathetic things. She is a slut just waiting to be fucked by someone else other than her husband. Give it a couple of minutes and she will be ready for anyone male or female. And of course the husband stands there and watchs. In fact encourages. How fashionable is that?
Stopping it there was bush.
It was barely one short page. That was not a natural place to stop. You need to find a natural break in the story before you end a chapter. Stopping it right in the middle of an ongoing scene is not a natural break in the story.
Yikes
I don't need to read any more, not very good and I don't care if L.A. fucks the Saints.
good beginning
This story appears to be headed in one of several right directions. But Baremetal needs to be aware that the story could continue as nothing more than a series of encounters between L.A. and attractive men she and her husband meet, all with the husband's generous approval. It could end up as a boring story of the same thin, the same thin and more of that. The author must now be very inventive and quite selective about what goes on relative to L.A. RAG
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