by whoruwhoami
...but i loved your work! there were a few points where i wondered at your choice of phrase as it seemed a little formal - but the final words revealed all! i have to admit to picturing a wife welcoming her husband home - i love the way you use this piece to make the reader to realise how passionate and loving and erotic sex between 2 men can be! congratulations on a brilliant piece of writing - i will be looking for more of your work in the future! (whoami? female 34)