That was a nice second chapter that you wrote. I'll have to agree with Daddy and hope that you do not stretch this out to wear reading it becomes a bore. I like how you have the sister playing coy with some of her comments and not giving in to her stepbrother. I can hardly wait to see we you do the next chapter with Robbie, Kris and Michelle.
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Anonymous04/08/09
Awesome
Loved it... can't wait to read the next part...:-D
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Anonymous04/08/09
take it slow...very hot
Drag the story out for many chapters...so hot
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Anonymous04/10/09
whats the hurry?
hi there,
now don't go hurrying this story up just coz some premature ejaculator can't hold on to his load. less is more and keeps one wanting even more. grin...am hooked...keep writing mate.
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Anonymous06/01/12
Why do guys have to be such clods?
That was so moronic of him to show himself after what the two girls had divulged to each other.
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Please don't drag this good story out
I surely don't want to become frustrated with little chapters that don't move the story along..Thanks.....Rich
Amen to what Rich said!
It's a good tale, but I do wish you would move it along.
Nice Second Chapter!!!
That was a nice second chapter that you wrote. I'll have to agree with Daddy and hope that you do not stretch this out to wear reading it becomes a bore. I like how you have the sister playing coy with some of her comments and not giving in to her stepbrother. I can hardly wait to see we you do the next chapter with Robbie, Kris and Michelle.
Awesome
Loved it... can't wait to read the next part...:-D
take it slow...very hot
Drag the story out for many chapters...so hot
whats the hurry?
hi there,
now don't go hurrying this story up just coz some premature ejaculator can't hold on to his load. less is more and keeps one wanting even more. grin...am hooked...keep writing mate.
Why do guys have to be such clods?
That was so moronic of him to show himself after what the two girls had divulged to each other.
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