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AcalAcalabout 15 years agoAuthor
To Anon

I received your message but I can't tell you anything if I don't have your contact address

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Needs work.

Your English needs a lot of work, especially the punctuation: use more commas to make the sentence structure understandable. And PLEASE avoid switching between past and present tenses - that just feels horrible (in any language, not only English).

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