All Comments on 'Aftermath'

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EspressoBolusEspressoBolusabout 15 years ago
Nicely done

Well balanced. I would like to have seen how Connie reacted to the reality of her suggestion, but that would just be cruel.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
this was the aftermath of Connie's accident

what was the aftermath of their actions? Since it was Connie who initiated them coming together, I disagree with the decision to lie to her.

And I am confused,

she was a widow, he is Connie's husband. How was there a "cherry" to take? and why is first time listed as a Tag?

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