All Comments on 'Beloved'

I'd like to see where this is going. Please keep writing and exploring your talent. :-)

Don't leave us hanging - we need to follow Jasmine's story!

Can't wait to see where this story leads. Don't leave us waiting to long please

please please please keep this going, it's so good already!!!

awesome story and can't wait to hear about the hottie who saved her

Please continue the story :D. My intrigue is definately peaked ;).

Sick. Who would be turned on by hurting others. Sick sick sick

No one force, no need to a nasty prick either. Alot of storie's start out this way. Victim, Hero, and so on, so shut up. Great story, keep writing and ignore the fool. Their only purpose here is to cry and complain. Can't wait to read the rest.