All Comments on 'Her Breasts Are the Beginning Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very Strange Ending to Part Two Of This Story!

Loved part one of this story. This second part doesn't make sense. He has just licked her from her toes right up to her clit, given her this wonderful big orgasm, slips beside her, they look into each others eyes - then the last thing she notices is he has drifted off to sleep!!! Typical man!!! They haven't fucked yet. He is not supposed to fall asleep until they have made love!!! Very strange ending to part two. Will read part three tomorrow. I hope it has a better ending than this part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Great descriptions. Keep writing.

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