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At what point does she have the police waiting
outside come in to bust the ring after all she said no and was forced to go ahead. A massive gang rape.
I assume that there are minds out there that
are sick enough to get hard over a tale like this-
Potential
People who dis nc stories because they are too nc should read other genres. gyrl likes the idea and while your first story has some timing issues, it shows potential.
if you don't like non-consentual then don't read.
I really loved this story and I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
Has Potential
This totally reminds me of a photoshoot I had earlier this year - much similar and it was wonderful. My main complaint is about how fast the rising action, climax, and resolution take place. As far as spacing goes for the entire story, it's perfect but maybe more descriptions of Ty and Hank...
To those who rated this poorly, you're in a NC section. If you don't want to read about forced sex, choose a different genre.
WOW......
you made me cum.....hard!
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