Ah it looks like a new challenger has arived. I wounder how this will turn out. Once again great story so far. This one was a little calmer then the last but i like the tension ur building between kris and robb. looking foward to the next chapter.
Many you wrote another great Chapter for the series. I like how you described what Kris did to Robbie with the other two girls around. I like what Robbie did to Kris during the first part of the chapter. I like how you introduced a new character Diane. What I didn't like was being left paying at the end is chapter. I hope you write the next chapter soon. Mark
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Anonymous04/11/09
Fantastic
Once again another great chapter, I really love this story and where it is going... write quicker :-)
That was an amazing chapter with a very surprising twist at the end. Now will he hld true to his word that he will only loose his virginity to Kris or will he sucumb to the feminine wilds of Diane. I'm betting on Diane having a surprise in store for her she won't believe could happen to her.
That was an amazing chapter with a very surprising twist at the end. Now will he hold true to his word that he will only loose his virginity to Kris or will he sucumb to the feminine wilds of Diane. I'm betting on Diane having a surprise in store for her she won't believe could happen to her.
He seems to be heading in the right direction. I thought it was possibly the best chapter so far.
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Anonymous04/21/09
Yet another twist
Good Show!!! Throwing Diane into the mix now changes the equation. Will he or won't he -- with Diane? I like the way you've kept us on the edge of our seat, trying to second-guess what comes next. Tune in again next week, boys and girls...
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Anonymous10/28/09
ruined
totally ruined i stopped as soon as he went down stairs i knew i was totally ruined he never should have gone down or if he did it should have been only to say he was going out and didn't know when he would be back. for him to join them was admitting defeat no guy as shy as he was and that had the feelings he had for his sister would ever have gone down keep it atleast sounding realistic please such a waste i was starting to like this series i should have know that as a writer on this site you like all the others would ruin a good story
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12/17/09
WOW!
I loved it. There was real raw emotion. Your characters are amazing. I don't know how Diane showing up will affect the story, but I still love it. Great job.
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Anonymous09/22/15
hmmm
i liked the others but i hated the orgy scene it was so awkward. she brought him in so only she could be with him and the others watched... i stopped reading
English
Oh boy.
Ah it looks like a new challenger has arived. I wounder how this will turn out. Once again great story so far. This one was a little calmer then the last but i like the tension ur building between kris and robb. looking foward to the next chapter.
Another Great Chapter!!!
Many you wrote another great Chapter for the series. I like how you described what Kris did to Robbie with the other two girls around. I like what Robbie did to Kris during the first part of the chapter. I like how you introduced a new character Diane. What I didn't like was being left paying at the end is chapter. I hope you write the next chapter soon. Mark
Fantastic
Once again another great chapter, I really love this story and where it is going... write quicker :-)
Amazing chapter
That was an amazing chapter with a very surprising twist at the end. Now will he hld true to his word that he will only loose his virginity to Kris or will he sucumb to the feminine wilds of Diane. I'm betting on Diane having a surprise in store for her she won't believe could happen to her.
Amazing chapter
That was an amazing chapter with a very surprising twist at the end. Now will he hold true to his word that he will only loose his virginity to Kris or will he sucumb to the feminine wilds of Diane. I'm betting on Diane having a surprise in store for her she won't believe could happen to her.
Really good chapter
He still is trying to not submit to her wishes, and be with her only when they are in a group. Hope he get to breed her.Thanks . Rich
I liked it.
He seems to be heading in the right direction. I thought it was possibly the best chapter so far.
Yet another twist
Good Show!!! Throwing Diane into the mix now changes the equation. Will he or won't he -- with Diane? I like the way you've kept us on the edge of our seat, trying to second-guess what comes next. Tune in again next week, boys and girls...
ruined
totally ruined i stopped as soon as he went down stairs i knew i was totally ruined he never should have gone down or if he did it should have been only to say he was going out and didn't know when he would be back. for him to join them was admitting defeat no guy as shy as he was and that had the feelings he had for his sister would ever have gone down keep it atleast sounding realistic please such a waste i was starting to like this series i should have know that as a writer on this site you like all the others would ruin a good story
WOW!
I loved it. There was real raw emotion. Your characters are amazing. I don't know how Diane showing up will affect the story, but I still love it. Great job.
hmmm
i liked the others but i hated the orgy scene it was so awkward. she brought him in so only she could be with him and the others watched... i stopped reading
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