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I'll Show You Mine If... Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by ziplash04/12/09

Keep Them cumming!!! I love how this is going!

Reading the last part of the story has me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment! I love your stories!

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by Anonymous04/12/09

Yup! We need more.

Well done and humorous, too. Lets have more.

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by Dashsway04/12/09

AUGH UR SUCH A TEASE!!!

All i can say is i want more!!!!!

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by cacowboy4804/12/09

Damn hot chapter

This was a very hot chapter and am really looking. Forward to the next one as I see things really heating up between these two from here on. I knew he wasn't going to give up his cherry to Diane.

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by digdaddyrich04/12/09

They belong to each other but they don't know it

I'm sure that it will eventually come to them that they love each other to the point that they don't want to be with anyone else.

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by Anonymous04/12/09

Only Getting Better !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is only getting BETTER with each chapter, continue!!!

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by Anonymous04/12/09

Awesome

Absolutely well written; love it and can't wait for more!

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by Anonymous04/13/09

Amazing as always

This story just gets better with every chapter...you're teasing me, and I love it...write faster I want to read more about Kris and Rob... this story is excellent... I see a great relationship forming here :-D

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by oldwayne04/13/09

Good chapter.

Looking forward to more of the story.

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by Anonymous10/28/09

spineless

he is a spineless idiot by allowing diane in his room and fooling around with her he just proves that he doesn't really care about kris and the part after in the kitchen was just as bad instead of being mad at kris for arrainging for diane to come over he makes up with her so unrealistic it made me want to puke the guy hasn't got the guts to back up his own words he is a total waste of space and the writer keeps rushing things all that happened in this chapter should have taken place over several months not one day a real guy would have not let diane into his room and found a way to stay home from the trip then when they all came back he would tell them he was going to a different college then avoid kris the rest of his life keep it realistic please

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by Anonymous11/21/09

Show nme yours

Awesome work!

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by Anonymous07/27/13

Intense!

And exciting.
Scale

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by thebug3710/13/15

IS MOM CLOSE TO BEING WITH SONNY

GREAT IDEA

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